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chanyeolears

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Will you please take me as your husband? The one who's willing to have your terrible cookings as his favorite dishes, the one you’ll be giving your long lectures and a lesson to everytime he acts up, and let yourself being called as ‘Mrs.Wayne’?

 

should the bold ones stay as ‘his/he’ or ‘my/I’?

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1 hour ago, chanyeolears said:

Will you please take me as your husband? The one who's willing to have your terrible cookings as his favorite dishes, the one you’ll be giving your long lectures and a lesson to everytime he acts up, and let yourself being called as ‘Mrs.Wayne’?

 

should the bold ones stay as ‘his/he’ or ‘my/I’?

his/he is correct, but here's some other suggestions if you like:

- "cooking" instead of "cookings"

- "every time" instead of "everytime"

- "be called" instead of "being called as"

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