gno 1,887 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 So today i performed at the Arts center i work at and i performed one of my fave song from 2pm The choreo is all original made up by me, altho i was inspired by 2pms Again & Again dance so plz critic me, and let me know how i did! don't be afraid to REALLY critic me either, i don't mind infact look forward to it. i know some of my moves are sloppy but i try XD https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L_1qvMbjVyY i hope i did 2pm justice XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PornStar 237 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 you dance very well i can't judge since i am not a dancer :D at least better than Wooyoung JYP audition Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aripod 2,721 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 i love this song. nice dancing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapmon's Ahjussi Husband 2,299 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 I'm really awfull at judging, but I liked ur arm movement, ur feet not so much, and I didn't like the green pants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gno 1,887 Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 I'm really awfull at judging, but I liked ur arm movement, ur feet not so much, and I didn't like the green pants i do need to improve my footwork actually, i think more about the arm movements so much i ignore the footwork ~ thank you! also these are my fave sweatpants XDDD you dance very well i can't judge since i am not a dancer :D at least better than Wooyoung JYP audition thank you! <33 i love this song. nice dancing. thanks so much <33 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaity 5,777 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 you did really good! but when you do moves that include your upper body (chest pops rolls etc) it doesnt look that sharp so maybe put some of the effort into your upper body movements as you do your legs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphonyâ„¢ 11,329 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 I though you were a girl, but that is the best 2PM song ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVirginThotty 3,905 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 That was awesome XD! I'm too afraid to put my dancing and singing out there so I can't judge ya too harshly but as someone said foot work...one thing that helps me is that I do a move over and over again until I think I have the right fluid movement ^^ fighting ur awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Fei 742 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 You are a really good choreographer, let me compliment you. I am not a dancer, so i cant judge you properly; sorry i can only admire your hardwork. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee 9,628 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Please teach my oppars your moves! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlie 1,607 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 I thought it was really good. And I love this song too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gno 1,887 Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 you did really good! but when you do moves that include your upper body (chest pops rolls etc) it doesnt look that sharp so maybe put some of the effort into your upper body movements as you do your legs ahh i see, its the fact im slightly overweight, so my moves can't be as clean and sharp i want them to be, so i am working on losing weight so i don't jiggle as much when i dance XDD and i actually feel is my lower body is what need more work on but this is good to know, i need to tighten up in all areas ~ Thank so much!! :33 I though you were a girl, but that is the best 2PM song ever. u thought i was a girl from just being here on OH, or simply from the video? That was awesome XD! I'm too afraid to put my dancing and singing out there so I can't judge ya too harshly but as someone said foot work...one thing that helps me is that I do a move over and over again until I think I have the right fluid movement ^^ fighting ur awesome! its about gettin over the hurdle of seeing yourself mainly, im am SOOOOOO not used to looking at myself or hearing myself (which is very bad) the way other ppl do, so im definitely not comfortable watching myself, but i figured i'll never know unless i put it out there and repeating moves is so helpful ~ the chorus parts i did back in 2010 ~ that was the only REAL part i constantly practiced, other parts were literally made up weeks and hours before XD (taecyeon's rap part i made up while rehearsing earlier today XDD) You are a really good choreographer, let me compliment you. I am not a dancer, so i cant judge you properly; sorry i can only admire your hardwork. its ok! the fact you said im really good choreographer really makes me feel good <33 maybe in the future i'll do more covers, thank you!! <33 Please teach my oppars your moves! lol XDDD I thought it was really good. And I love this song too. thank you so much!! and yes this song is too awesome, i wished 2pm performed this more ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
What I think is 18 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 What kind of impression from the audience do you want them to? Movement wise: your moves are sooo smooooth and flow nicely with the song (and I love it) If you need more of bold impression from the audience, you just need to add a "snap" technic at some the end of the music beat/change of the movement Above all, I like to see your dance and will be very glad to see more of it 😊 Great job!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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