Financial Aid Suspension Letter! :D (Need to Recheck Again)

[xLeeChaex]

i just rewrote my essay a bit, i just changed a few sentences thats all lol

Here is the paragraph part of my letter

I want to know again if its good lol

 

here are the questions that are part of the essay

 

What has changed in your circumstances in order for you to be successful? (Attach documentation)

What steps are you taking to prevent future unsatisfactory academic progress? (Attach documentation)

What will you need to accomplish in order to meet the standards of Satisfactory Academic Progress by the end of the next term(s)?

 

 

Here is the essay i rewrote and fixed a bit

 

The circumstances that have changed in order for me to become successful is that everything is back to normal in my house. Even though my grandmother passed away, my mother is feeling better than before and everything in the house is finally calm. There is nothing going on in our house as of now, and I feel more relaxed with myself. I feel I can finally focus on my main priority which is going to school and taking classes that are required for my A.A degree. I want to earn my A.A degree because I want to have a future for myself and earn a living, but, without financial aid, I cannot do that. The steps that I will take to prevent future unsatisfactory academic progress is that even if I am under a stressful situation while I am taking classes in (College Name), I will try my very best to remain relaxed and do what I possibly can to finish the class. I know I will push myself to finish any class I take in (College Name) and get a 3.0 GPA or higher. I will do the classes that are required from start to finish with absolutely no excuses to get my A.A Degree in (College Name). If I am having a difficult time with a class I am taking, I will ask for help and not give up the class I am taking. Lastly, what I will do to accomplish in order to meet the standards of Satisfactory Academic Progress by the end of the next term is that I will study the classes that are needed for my degree. I will actually do the work that is given in class, study for the exams, and do the project in order for me to get good grades to maintain the required GPA for the Satisfactory Academic Progress. I will do the classes that are needed for my degree and have an overall completion rate of 67% or higher by not withdrawing classes. On top of that, I will complete my degree within the 150% timeframe with my program of study.