xLeeChaex 46 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 i want to ask ur opinions if u think this paragraph actually answers the questions for the financial aid suspension and u guys think its good enough tbh lol this is just part of the essay i wrote This is a letter for withdrawing classes while i was dual enrolled These are the questions What has changed in your circumstances in order for you to be successful? (Attach documentation) What steps are you taking to prevent future unsatisfactory academic progress? (Attach documentation) What will you need to accomplish in order to meet the standards of Satisfactory Academic Progress by the end of the next term(s)? Dont worry about the blank lines, just read and check if its good enough lmao My paragraph The circumstances that has changed in order for me to become successful is that everything is back to normal in my house. Even though my grandmother past away, my mother is feeling better than before and everything in the house is finally calm. Their is nothing going on in our house as of now and I feel more relaxed with myself. I feel I can finally focus on my main priority which is going to school and taking classes that are required for my A.A degree. The steps that I will take to prevent future unsatisfactory academic progress is that even if I am under a stressful situation while I am taking classes in ______, I will try my very best to remain relax and do what I possibly can to finish the class. I know I will push myself to finish any class I take in ______ and get a 3.0 GPA or higher. I will do the classes that are required from start to finish with absolute no excuses to get my A.A Degree in _______. If I am having a difficult time with a class I am taking, I will ask for help and not give up the class I am taking. Lastly, to accomplish in order to meet the standards of Satisfactory Academic Progress by the end of the next term is that I will study the classes that are needed for my degree. I will develop good study habits and manage my time to get good grades in order to maintain the required GPA for the Satisfactory Academic Progress. I will do the classes that are needed for my degree and have an overall completion rate of 67% or higher by not withdrawing classes. On top of that, I will complete my degree within the 150% timeframe with my program of study. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodBot 1,005 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Goodluck on getting unsuspended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seungwan 626 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 i think it's good just a few things past -> passed their -> there after 'as of now' you should put a comma relax -> relaxed absolute -> absolutely change lastly to accomplish to "lastly, what i will do to accomplish" with each answer for the question start a new paragraph so they know where to read the proper response that's all i hoped i helped and good luck !! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♩ ♪ ♫ ♬ 730 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 i feel like you should be even more specific because honestly your letter just sounds like a lot of promises you may need documents, references and stuff? but i'm not too familiar with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miLoDy 1,988 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Be more specific with what ways you will maintain and pass a class ie: good study habits... what do you mean? Do homework, pass projects on time? I'm sorry you got suspended or removed of your financial support. Hope, you go up from here. Aside from this, try to motivate yourself. What made you decide to get an AA in _______? Is it what you want to be? Just a few question to ponder on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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