eunheart 4,862 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 Hello OHers! I am here writing for the first time. I'm not sure if this is poetry enough but I'll just give it a go. It's rather a short one. But I think it does have impact. Caution though cause you might feel uncomfortable with it. So, I'm putting this in spoiler in case. Mood : ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ Tell me, what is love? Is love a promised life beauty? Or just a mere toxicity? Is it really something that we can share and be happy? Or it's just a topic to fill the void of our life daily? Maybe it is not as easy as what we think about love Or it can be as simple as we ought how difficult it can be If it's that simple, why do we get affected so much by love? Is it wrong to seek for it? Or is it wrong to shower it to the one we love? It's always seems to be the case where we live for a short precious happiness and suffer eternally Or is that really been the things that we get on finding and giving love? Cause it always appear to be blurry rather than a bliss, really And here I am questioning my entire journey of it, with life, and my sanity So tell me, what is love. ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ã…¡ Hope you enjoy this short writing. I might write more depending on how you all gonna react to this so- I would love to know your opinions about it ^^ That's all for now. Thanks for visiting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JihyoStoleMyHeartAYAYAY 22,189 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 its beautiful i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akidoki 1,453 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 Awww. It's lovely. I generally don't write poetry cause I can't rhyme to save my life. But this is so beautiful. You are one talented eun. I can't wait to read more. ♡ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueNose 2,767 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 That’s was beautiful, Eunnie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chu chu~ 2,534 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 Awwwww Eun, I love it. Keep writing and sharing with us <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueNose 2,767 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 Awww. It's lovely. I generally don't write poetry cause I can't rhyme to save my life. But this is so beautiful. You are one talented eun. I can't wait to read more. ♡ You don’t have to rhyme to make it poetry There are plenty of types that don’t need to rhyme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akidoki 1,453 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 You don’t have to rhyme to make it poetry There are plenty of types that don’t need to rhyme I have read the ones that don't rhyme too. Some of them are so well written. But I doubt I can write one. My poetry skills died 10 years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueNose 2,767 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 I have read the ones that don't rhyme too. Some of them are so well written. But I doubt I can write one. My poetry skills died 10 years ago. Aww Aki rip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elscian 5,139 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 this is beautiful, sad but true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angy 5,950 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 aww it's cute can't believe u ended shakespeare like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bel. 9,750 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 My daughter is that talented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eunheart 4,862 Posted January 19, 2019 Author Share Posted January 19, 2019 its beautiful i love it thanks jiee ♥ appreciate it You don’t have to rhyme to make it poetry There are plenty of types that don’t need to rhyme I have read the ones that don't rhyme too. Some of them are so well written. But I doubt I can write one. My poetry skills died 10 years ago. thanks aki & bluwu ♥ and aki, agreed with bluwuuu- you don't have to be rhymed all the time and poetry came in lots of style so it's not restricted my last poem was in school too so your excuse is pretty much invalid to me Awwwww Eun, I love it. Keep writing and sharing with us <3 thank chuchuu! glad you like it <3 i'll do my best to come out with more writings when i inspired ^^ aww it's cute can't believe u ended shakespeare like that as cute as eunha it is uwu- appreciate that sunbae your unicorn cult really inspiring me to end shakespeare kek My daughter is that talented as talented as her momma indeed! thank youuuuu bel belle bel bel ♥ also sorry momma i'm outta upvote for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trashie 10,243 Posted January 19, 2019 Share Posted January 19, 2019 wow this is so good! you ended twice I wanna know know know know what is love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
French Rose 2,321 Posted January 20, 2019 Share Posted January 20, 2019 Awwwww dupieeee you're awesome! I love your poem. It actually shows the different sides of love, it can be the best or the worst depends on how a person perceives it. Reminds me of the book Delirium where love is declared as a disease. Can't wait for you to share more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kai Ackerman 763 Posted January 20, 2019 Share Posted January 20, 2019 I'm no expert but I can say that I liked it greatly~~ It really depicts a person's journey in life and the many ways that love is percieved~~ Hope to read more~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted January 21, 2019 Share Posted January 21, 2019 Wow I got emo reading this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eunheart 4,862 Posted February 20, 2019 Author Share Posted February 20, 2019 oooooof mess i didn't reply to these doaigosdgidsgos it's one month after but better than nothing!! so- wow this is so good! you ended twice I wanna know know know know what is love how i wish i ended twice but thanks trashie ♥ Awwwww dupieeee you're awesome! I love your poem. It actually shows the different sides of love, it can be the best or the worst depends on how a person perceives it. Reminds me of the book Delirium where love is declared as a disease. Can't wait for you to share more oooof you read-- I'm not a reading person ã… ã… but I'm intrigued with how you can relate my poem to a book I'm-- WOW thanks dupieeeee i'll try better next time ♥ I'm no expert but I can say that I liked it greatly~~ It really depicts a person's journey in life and the many ways that love is percieved~~ Hope to read more~~ Awww thanks! I'm trying to reflect on things happening around me Thanks a lot! I'll try to be more creative writer ♥ Wow I got emo reading this algkhkjgsa why twinnieeeeee Don't emo too muchhh ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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