GodYezi 102 Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 So I'm thinking of writing a fanfiction involving my favourite anime characters (Aizen, Near, Johan, Shinichi and Kakashi) and I'm not sure what would be a good plot. I was thinking of this - the creator of the universe takes these 5 from their worlds and brings them together in a parallel universe where they need to compete in some way and in the end there's going to be one winner. Not physical combat but mind games. Maybe solving a case or finding a treasure. But I'm not sure. Can you help me? I'll give 20k won to the best idea. lol. ok. the forum is really dying.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 What if u make it as if one of the 5th killed another character. And all of them must try to find who is the culprit between them. Maybe not saying who's the culprit will make it more interesting especially if it's the characters that looks the more innocent. In a game where one must only believe in himself. Sorry if it's lame lol and doesn't go much in details maybe I can help u more if u like this idea or if I also have some new ideas. I love creating stories but I suck at mysteries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 19, 2018 Author Share Posted August 19, 2018 What if u make it as if one of the 5th killed another character. And all of them must try to find who is the culprit between them. Maybe not saying who's the culprit will make it more interesting especially if it's the characters that looks the more innocent. In a game where one must only believe in himself. Sorry if it's lame lol and doesn't go much in details maybe I can help u more if u like this idea or if I also have some new ideas. I love creating stories but I suck at mysteries. It's not lame, don't worry, I appreciate your help. Well, I don't know if you know all 5 characters but, the only one capable of killing any of the others would be Aizen, so that would be too obvious. Though I could take away Aizen's and Kakashi's super-natural powers and then keep up with your idea. But then again, the most innocent looking one here can't be the killer, as Near is physically weak. He might use a gun, probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 It's not lame, don't worry, I appreciate your help. Well, I don't know if you know all 5 characters but, the only one capable of killing any of the others would be Aizen, so that would be too obvious. Though I could take away Aizen's and Kakashi's super-natural powers and then keep up with your idea. But then again, the most innocent looking one here can't be the killer, as Near is physically weak. He might use a gun, probably. Yeah u have a point when u say that it would be pretty easy to find who was the killer especially talking about powers or abbilities. If we remove super natural powers it would be much more fair to the other characters imo. But if u do so it might seem a bit weird to a reader that's used to seeing them with their power. As for the most innocent looking I was talking about someone who seems the more invested or someone who has less reasons to be the killer. But anyways let's give up on this idea we should create a game that's challenging to all of these smart ass characters. Usually all smart character use chess or sth to test their abbilities. Did u have any ideas when u first thought about this? Even the smallest would be pretty helpful I'm actually interested in creating such story lol ^^ Btw I know most of the characters except Johan. I'm gonna google him rn Edit: Nvm I've seen him before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 19, 2018 Author Share Posted August 19, 2018 Yeah u have a point when u say that it would be pretty easy to find who was the killer especially talking about powers or abbilities. If we remove super natural powers it would be much more fair to the other characters imo. But if u do so it might seem a bit weird to a reader that's used to seeing them with their power. As for the most innocent looking I was talking about someone who seems the more invested or someone who has less reasons to be the killer. But anyways let's give up on this idea we should create a game that's challenging to all of these smart ass characters. Usually all smart character use chess or sth to test their abbilities. Did u have any ideas when u first thought about this? Even the smallest would be pretty helpful I'm actually interested in creating such story lol ^^ Btw I know most of the characters except Johan. I'm gonna google him rn Edit: Nvm I've seen him before Yeah I might have to remove their super-powers. Aizen could easily kill all the others if he wanted to. He's unpredictable so... Also, probably it'd be better if there were more rounds and every round, the character who did the worse in that round dies. One round could be like putting each one in a stressful situation and see how easily they give up. Another round could be about solving crime cases for each one. And the one who solves it the last is eliminated. And for each round, there would be a mini-chapter revolving around one particular character. So every round would be a chapter with 6 mini chapters (6th would be the final results of that round). I'd like some interaction between them too so another round might be like some type of survival game. They're put in a dangerous place and some of them would have to team up to have more chance of surviving. (since 2 of these are very manipulative, this could be pretty interesting) Have you watched all Monster or you just saw pictures of Johan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 Yeah I might have to remove their super-powers. Aizen could easily kill all the others if he wanted to. He's unpredictable so... Also, probably it'd be better if there were more rounds and every round, the character who did the worse in that round dies. One round could be like putting each one in a stressful situation and see how easily they give up. Another round could be about solving crime cases for each one. And the one who solves it the last is eliminated. And for each round, there would be a mini-chapter revolving around one particular character. So every round would be a chapter with 6 mini chapters (6th would be the final results of that round). I'd like some interaction between them too so another round might be like some type of survival game. They're put in a dangerous place and some of them would have to team up to have more chance of surviving. (since 2 of these are very manipulative, this could be pretty interesting) Have you watched all Monster or you just saw pictures of Johan? Wow that's super interesting I though it would only have one chapter. But it will take u a longer time and much more ideas to finish it. As for the super powers maybe u could make it as if the person who created the game is much more powerful than any of them. He took them all from their specific worlds just to test their mental abbilities leaving them without any powers in a game where they have to deal with their biggest fears and weaknesses. Stressful situation could include seeing their loved ones in danger or putting them in physical pain (though it's actually mental) As for the crime scenes I'm not sure myself I was just wondering what would happen to the eliminated characters. Will they die? Or is it that they'll be shown as dead to the others just so it will scare them? I actually want them to learn sth from this experience. I would even wish for them to become friends if I didn't know them enough lol. Also I wonder if they'll try to lie to each other if they team up like that kid who think they'll get their grades based on the individual work lol or actually help each other. Anyways it's gonna be hard to think about the details of which game the only thing I can think about now is using their weakest points. And no I haven't seen Monster just some of his pictures. His creepy face makes a lot of good memes I guess lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 19, 2018 Author Share Posted August 19, 2018 Wow that's super interesting I though it would only have one chapter. But it will take u a longer time and much more ideas to finish it. As for the super powers maybe u could make it as if the person who created the game is much more powerful than any of them. He took them all from their specific worlds just to test their mental abbilities leaving them without any powers in a game where they have to deal with their biggest fears and weaknesses. Stressful situation could include seeing their loved ones in danger or putting them in physical pain (though it's actually mental) As for the crime scenes I'm not sure myself I was just wondering what would happen to the eliminated characters. Will they die? Or is it that they'll be shown as dead to the others just so it will scare them? I actually want them to learn sth from this experience. I would even wish for them to become friends if I didn't know them enough lol. Also I wonder if they'll try to lie to each other if they team up like that kid who think they'll get their grades based on the individual work lol or actually help each other. Anyways it's gonna be hard to think about the details of which game the only thing I can think about now is using their weakest points. And no I haven't seen Monster just some of his pictures. His creepy face makes a lot of good memes I guess lol. omg if you only knew the things he has done.. lol On one hand, I don't want to spoil it for you but on the other, it's harder to write about a character that you don't know so I can summarize it for you (if you don't mind). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 omg if you only knew the things he has done.. lol On one hand, I don't want to spoil it for you but on the other, it's harder to write about a character that you don't know so I can summarize it for you (if you don't mind). Well all the people I know hate him but I've never known how bad he really is. If u also don't mind u can tell me. i mean how bad could he be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 19, 2018 Author Share Posted August 19, 2018 Well all the people I know hate him but I've never known how bad he really is. If u also don't mind u can tell me. i mean how bad could he be So when he was a kid, his life was saved by a surgeon. And after that, he started killing people just because. And the surgeon once saw him shooting one of his patients 3 times in the head. At the age 15 he was controlling an underground black market and at 10 he made 50 people kill one another with just words. He then made a detective kill himself by bringing back his dark past (that episode is really fucked up. the way he did it) and also controlled so many other criminals to be his servants. He also disguised as his twin sister to gain information from detectives. And also sent an innocent orphan kid to find his mother at a red district (his mom was a hooker) and in the end the kid tried to kill himself. Johan just wanted to prove the surgeon that people's lives are not equal and the only thing that people are equal in is death. In the end, he told the surgeon to kill him (he told this to other 3 characters in the past, including his sister). The surgeon refused so Johan grabbed a kid and pointed the gun at his head. Only then, the kid's father (which came out of nowhere) shot Johan. And in the last episode, the surgeon saved Johan's life once again by doing surgery on him. I know this all seems confusing cause I missed out many details but it's the shortest summary I could think of. I really recommend watching it to understand it all although I kinda took away most of the fun by spoiling. lol. but still, it would be enjoyable I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 20, 2018 Share Posted August 20, 2018 So when he was a kid, his life was saved by a surgeon. And after that, he started killing people just because. And the surgeon once saw him shooting one of his patients 3 times in the head. At the age 15 he was controlling an underground black market and at 10 he made 50 people kill one another with just words. He then made a detective kill himself by bringing back his dark past (that episode is really fucked up. the way he did it) and also controlled so many other criminals to be his servants. He also disguised as his twin sister to gain information from detectives. And also sent an innocent orphan kid to find his mother at a red district (his mom was a hooker) and in the end the kid tried to kill himself. Johan just wanted to prove the surgeon that people's lives are not equal and the only thing that people are equal in is death. In the end, he told the surgeon to kill him (he told this to other 3 characters in the past, including his sister). The surgeon refused so Johan grabbed a kid and pointed the gun at his head. Only then, the kid's father (which came out of nowhere) shot Johan. And in the last episode, the surgeon saved Johan's life once again by doing surgery on him. I know this all seems confusing cause I missed out many details but it's the shortest summary I could think of. I really recommend watching it to understand it all although I kinda took away most of the fun by spoiling. lol. but still, it would be enjoyable I think. Dafuq... I can understand now...why people hate him But believe me rather than spoiling u just made me more curious. Is there any worse than this lol Anyways thanks for explaining, at least now I don't to stare at all those memes without understanding lol Btw after he is saved by that surgeon does he change or does he stay the same as before? Sorry for the late reply my internet connection sucks currently so sometimes I end up with no wifi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 20, 2018 Author Share Posted August 20, 2018 Dafuq... I can understand now...why people hate him But believe me rather than spoiling u just made me more curious. Is there any worse than this lol Anyways thanks for explaining, at least now I don't to stare at all those memes without understanding lol Btw after he is saved by that surgeon does he change or does he stay the same as before? Sorry for the late reply my internet connection sucks currently so sometimes I end up with no wifi I'll let you find that out by yourself. lol And don't worry. My connection is sometimes shitty too. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 20, 2018 Share Posted August 20, 2018 I'll let you find that out by yourself. lol And don't worry. My connection is sometimes shitty too. xD Damn it lol. Anyways how's the story going so far? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 20, 2018 Author Share Posted August 20, 2018 Damn it lol. Anyways how's the story going so far? Didn't even start it yet. haha. I'll start it tonight. It's 6:33pm here rn. Usually, I'm more productive at night so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APTX4869 2,670 Posted August 20, 2018 Share Posted August 20, 2018 Didn't even start it yet. haha. I'll start it tonight. It's 6:33pm here rn. Usually, I'm more productive at night so... Same lol if u come in the middle of the night near my apartment and see a shadow moving from a place to another that's me.I love thinking during the night especially while walking. Night are quiet and dark that's why they calm me down ^^ Edit: Anyways good luck with the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodYezi 102 Posted August 20, 2018 Author Share Posted August 20, 2018 Same lol if u come in the middle of the night near my apartment and see a shadow moving from a place to another that's me. I love thinking during the night especially while walking. Night are quiet and dark that's why they calm me down ^^ Edit: Anyways good luck with the story Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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