YoUr EyEs 873 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 It's crazy how loneliness can kill someone. Sometimes, darkness consumes over my shadow. Only then, I can finally brag about always being so hollow. Even without any happy endings, I smile to myself with sorrow. I can't keep going, so I follow. How long has it been since anyone even cared about me? How many times that I valued you over me? Don't be sad when I walk away, don't ask me about how I have been if you've never cared. Who knows, maybe you won't even notice that I am gone. Just keep in mind, loneliness can kill someone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glasshua 199 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Woah, this is so so beautiful. I don't know much about writing poems other than that it's extremely hard, but in my opinion there is just the perfect amount of rhyme in her and all the lines seem just the perfect length, and the message is so powerful. Absolutely amazing <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoUr EyEs 873 Posted July 18, 2018 Author Share Posted July 18, 2018 Woah, this is so so beautiful. I don't know much about writing poems other than that it's extremely hard, but in my opinion there is just the perfect amount of rhyme in her and all the lines seem just the perfect length, and the message is so powerful. Absolutely amazing <3 Thanks! I really appreciate it! I am happy to know that you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UMJI MOODS 11,518 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Quite lovely.♡♡♡ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoUr EyEs 873 Posted July 18, 2018 Author Share Posted July 18, 2018 Quite lovely.♡♡♡ Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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