Help me on this

[Kstarnet]

^^^^^^^^

 

I'm apply for a freelance job in Soompi,

https://www.soompi.com/2018/06/08/soompi-hiring-k-beauty-k-fashion-features-writer/

 

So I'm interested, I'm done with the cover letter along with the 5 original K-beauty and/or K-fashion ideas into the article,

 

So help me on this to see if there's anything to amend,

Cover letter

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yFz7H9HCBpAvX70cqYblRqYj0SKdFEDtGKz0oUEsw1o/edit?usp=sharing

 

5 original K-beauty and/or K-fashion ideas,

For Kfashion (male) and Kbeauty, I have 6,so just suggest which one to delete

Kfashion (male)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HiGKFH5JJmwt0z0d8T396-jouVLsl8IPriXSVO7d35A/edit?usp=sharing

 

Kbeauty

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12_ifygCcJwSMhrZYsHgEOt8QI28Ue4cw-T2nv2I785E/edit?usp=sharing

 

Kfashion (female)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i267533KxC3BelYzZpJmGha90IXgVhIea1INglxUM9Q/edit?usp=sharing

 

Thank you for your help in advance

[pinkpanda_spirit]

you need to accept my request for me to be able to read it :/

[Kstarnet]

you need to accept my request for me to be able to read it :/

Done

[pinkpanda_spirit]

Done

thx, I will send you a PM with what you should correct once I'm done reading the cover letter.

[tsaglaglal]

"so I will every nook and crany for them" a verb is missing

 

"sometimes that there are work" grammar is off

 

"Please feel free to call me,, for an interview at your convinience" the commas

[cake mf]

In male fashion delete #4 it’s basically a repeat of #3 and I just like #3 more.

 

For K-beauty delete #5 bc facial mist is unnecessary imo

 

Good luck OP!

[Kstarnet]

"so I will every nook and crany for them" a verb is missing

 

"sometimes that there are work" grammar is off

 

"Please feel free to call me,, for an interview at your convinience" the commas

In male fashion delete #4 it’s basically a repeat of #3 and I just like #3 more.

 

For K-beauty delete #5 bc facial mist is unnecessary imo

 

Good luck OP!

Thanks for your input, guys