zao 2,851 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 This is a poem about collection about bad feeling that I have, basically compilation of all bad feeling. The thing is, I make this poem and then other poem, and these are one thing being together, as a duality. This is named worst feeling, while the other is best feeling. This is kinda like I want you to know that your worst feeling, let it remain on your heart. But don't let it made your passion fading away. When I was younger, I thought I was happy. I always played happily with friends around me. Tell one another about the games we played. Also talking about basic things that made us happy. But then, I realized something deep. When I was a bit older than that time. They're going far, after knowing me. That I'm alone, and feel lonely. Maybe that's just my negative thoughts. Maybe that's just my feelings. But why it's so strong, and made me alone? Especially when I need them, they're gone. What is it? What is the feeling? Trapped in maze of eternal sadness. Tears are down, and crying hard. The things, just made me feeling down. Don't you know that I need you? Don't you know that you're precious for me? It hurts a lot, when I'm alone. I just need a friend, but I know your business. Basically, I'm the one who always waiting. For your existence, and then feeling happy. Even it's a short time, but it's precious. At least, I'm happy even for short time. Is there a hope? Can I dream about one thing? To feeling not alone anymore. I think, it's impossible. Don't you think the same way with me? Day by day passed, loneliness still there. I can't love myself, I just can't. Feeling noone appreciating me. Is the worst feeling that I ever felt. I hope you read it too, this is a duality of the feelings that I felt, but I hope that the best feeling will create some happy moments for us to reading. If you feeling sad, I'm sorry, but this is really my feeling when I was younger. For a better experience, read this one too: Best Feeling Check my other poems: Nyan's Weekly Poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trashie 10,243 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 you're so precious person you're the most one who deserved to be loved specially by you I hope sad feelings won't control you, Because if it once did, it'd drag you to much more negative thoughts so cheer up and think positively having people around you make you feel lonlier than being a lone so don't be discouraged because of it fighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
we are pristin 1,377 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 syzao you sweet bean youre always appreciated!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zao 2,851 Posted February 22, 2018 Author Share Posted February 22, 2018 you're so precious person you're the most one who deserved to be loved specially by you I hope sad feelings won't control you, Because if it once did, it'd drag you to much more negative thoughts so cheer up and think positively having people around you make you feel lonlier than being a lone so don't be discouraged because of it fighting Thankyou! It was a feeling when I was younger tho, up until now actually syzao you sweet bean youre always appreciated!!! Love you <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kayden411 6,540 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 You have such a way with words. sending hugs ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheese_it 8,304 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 wow i really love this poem, its as if i can feel the same emotions. Keep up these poems, im a fan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trashie 10,243 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 Thankyou! It was a feeling when I was younger tho, up until now actually Love you <3 I hope you would find the good feelings in you instead of dig the worst feeling )) you deserve only the good things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoUr EyEs 873 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 We all love you! Don't let this bad feelings get you, we are there for you~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zao 2,851 Posted February 22, 2018 Author Share Posted February 22, 2018 You have such a way with words. sending hugs ^^ Thanks for your help, I didn't realized that I need to pouring it to this kind of poem, and it cleansing my heart~ wow i really love this poem, its as if i can feel the same emotions. Keep up these poems, im a fan thanks for the appreciation <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zao 2,851 Posted February 22, 2018 Author Share Posted February 22, 2018 I hope you would find the good feelings in you instead of dig the worst feeling )) you deserve only the good things I love you We all love you! Don't let this bad feelings get you, we are there for you~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kayden411 6,540 Posted February 22, 2018 Share Posted February 22, 2018 Thanks for your help, I didn't realized that I need to pouring it to this kind of poem, and it cleansing my heart~ thanks for the appreciation <3 Sometimes, making ourselves vulnerable like this can be the most strengthening thing. You're an amazing person! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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