GrumpyCatt 374 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 I have an essay that's due tomorrow and I'm freaking out so much like on the verge of tears Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 i do lol but im too tired to read an essay now. Go start on your essay and brainstorm. once you begin, it's easier to continue. maybe work on finding answers to the prompt with examples, analyze then come up with thesis at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tearose 1,193 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 what's it about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shouto 168 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 Editing for what actual content or just the mechanics/grammar/vocabulary etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CantabileCross 638 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 depends on how long your essay is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrumpyCatt 374 Posted October 9, 2017 Author Share Posted October 9, 2017 i do lol but im too tired to read an essay now. Go start on your essay and brainstorm. once you begin, it's easier to continue. maybe work on finding answers to the prompt with examples, analyze then come up with thesis at the end. Already finished writing it what's it about Difference between a movie and book Editing for what actual content or just the mechanics/grammar/vocabulary etc. Just mechanics. or improving vocabulary etc. depends on how long your essay is 1 page or 2 It's just a high school essay written by a complete noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CantabileCross 638 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 Already finished writing it Difference between a movie and book Just mechanics. or improving vocabulary etc. 1 page or 2 It's just a high school essay written by a complete noob yee I'm down for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 aah nevermind. i thought you didn't start. can i peek at your essay Already finished writing it Difference between a movie and book Just mechanics. or improving vocabulary etc. 1 page or 2 It's just a high school essay written by a complete noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incurable LOONAtic 1,123 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 passion of burning papers is only what i have... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shouto 168 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 Already finished writing it Difference between a movie and book Just mechanics. or improving vocabulary etc. 1 page or 2 It's just a high school essay written by a complete noob Sure i'll look at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirine 4,209 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 If you want I can look at it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dux 3,142 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 me! ill do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 omg you have edits everywhere lmao im trying my best. start your body paragraphs with a topic sentence about the differences between the book and movie while connecting to your thesis. I also really like Katie's edit at the end where she emphasizes on the importance both the book and movie dwell on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delirium 4,237 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 Grammarly is free and helpful for writing and editing, for future reference so that you won't be on the verge of tears anymore passion of burning papers is only what i have... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrumpyCatt 374 Posted October 9, 2017 Author Share Posted October 9, 2017 omg you have edits everywhere lmao im trying my best. start your body paragraphs with a topic sentence about the differences between the book and movie while connecting to your thesis. I also really like Katie's edit at the end. Ikr Im soooo lost!!! Yeah I realized how off it seems now lol Grammarly is free and helpful for writing and editing, for future reference so that you won't be on the verge of tears anymore My teacher wants one edited by grammarly and one by an editor :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 yaa first change the word choice someone made for you then work on topic sentences and a thesis separate from the examples. write the topic sentences on an empty page for people to look at. Ikr Im soooo lost!!! Yeah I realized how off it seems now lol My teacher wants one edited by grammarly and one by an editor :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exi 350 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 I'll remember this next time I need help with homework. You OH ppl aren't so bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delirium 4,237 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 Ikr Im soooo lost!!! Yeah I realized how off it seems now lol My teacher wants one edited by grammarly and one by an editor :( oh wow I'm glad people offered to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrumpyCatt 374 Posted October 9, 2017 Author Share Posted October 9, 2017 oh wow I'm glad people offered to help ikr Im so touched lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyulkyung 5,023 Posted October 9, 2017 Share Posted October 9, 2017 im dinosaur btw aha do you like the way I reworded your sentence in the first paragraph "Some differences between the book and movie were that the movie emphasized more the characters' selflessness.." How is your progress going so far? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrumpyCatt 374 Posted October 9, 2017 Author Share Posted October 9, 2017 im dinosaur btw aha do you like the way I reworded your sentence in the first paragraph "Some differences between the book and movie were that the movie emphasized more the characters' selflessness.." How is your progress going so far? ahhhh dinosaur!!! Yeah I liked the sentence, I reworded it again for my final draft to make it longer lol. I finished and finally turned it in! ^^ Ill send you the link in case youre curious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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