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I dont really like Signal, but the girls did the best with what they had. Still, JYPE shouldn't write again for them unless it's a bop with no weird messed up parts.

 

Dahyun should make more efforts regarding her stage presence and give her all in their dancing, same with Chaeyoung. Both are good dancers, but they don't try as much as all the other girls. Sana, Jihyo, Nayeon, JY and Tzuyu aren't as talented as Momo and Mina in dancing but they sure burst their ass doing their best in everything.

 

Momo and Dahyun should have more control and confidence over their voices, I saw a huge improvement in each of the girls during lives but they still remains the same. Wish JYPE could let my girls have proper training and practice.

 

Anyway, it's not a bash, I love all my girls and want to see the best of them that I know they CAN do but with the lack of proper time and sleep it's more difficult to achieve.

 

So OH, can you give constructive criticism to your own faves?

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jine's gone, but arin needs to continue working on them vocals & her confidence in singing. jiho is confident but improvement is still needed. also, more @ wm: i get that main vocals all have higher pitched voices, but everyone else has lower pitched voices, so accommodate for that too thanks

also jine + binnie + arin need to be better at executing choreos bc they are the sloppiest

they're funnier when they aren't trying to be memes, stop trying to be memes

also @ wm they've expressed that they wanna try another concept, just keep that in mind bc fans have expressed that too

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I can't really give cc to Loona since they haven't debuted yet but, Weki Meki! Work on their vocal technique and projection as well as stage presence. They improved a lot by closing stage but they still have room. Also more of a fantagio criticism then anything WORK ON YOUR LINE DISTRIBUTION. (I swear Elly, Rina and Lucy got little to no lines)

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@bts

STOP DIETING

you're skinny enough theres nothing left to lose :donthinkso:

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I'll start with Joy. I love her a lot but I feel like she should've started her acting career with supporting roles instead of jumping into a lead role. Her acting was average, she has potential but she should really get more lessons. However, for a first drama, she didn't do a bad job.

Seulgi is such a sweetheart but I wish she was less awkward on variety. Seriously, her Radio Star appearance was so boring. Loosen up, tell a joke or two, expose your members... just don't sit their quietly and give the most boring answers. Same goes for Irene although she's quite funny sometimes.

Lastly, Yeri. I feel like she's a weaker performer than the rest of the girls. Her dancing is good but sometimes she looks like she doesn't want to be on stage. I wish she'd perform with more energy.

Wendy, you're doing well at everything. Just take care of yourself and eat well. Don't mind the ugly ass body shamers. But that's not even criticizing :lol:

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Post more Bangtan Bombs... :^(

also, especially to J-Hope: You don't need to be happy all the time. It's okay to feel sad and not smile. Don't feel pressured please. :^(

 

And to kard: Try out a new sound for the title track next comeback. Don't get me wrong, I love the current one, but I would love to see you doing something different.

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Ikr at KARD's company needing to promote them more in Korea. In order for their career to build stability, they need to be known in Korea.rlytearpls.png  I also want them to keep their style and not change their concepts. I like their style as is..

Kard - more at the company than the group, but promote in korea more. They've been on tour since they debuted and being rookies they need more exposure.

Twice - get BEP back asap

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I feel bad saying it but I wish BP would step up their performance a bit. I get it, they have zero say in when music gets released since they don't produce, they can't vlive when they want since they need a manager's approval but on stage... sometimes I feel like they are really bored performing and I know it's the same songs for months on end with no content but that's all the fans get too. 

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Wendy, you're doing well at everything. Just take care of yourself and eat well. Don't mind the ugly ass body shamers. But that's not even criticizing laugh.png

Plz.

 

To LOONA I can't say anything since they haven't debuted yet (like someone pointed above)

 

But to Dreamcatcher: Dongie and Gahyeon need to work on their dancing skills. They aren't bad but they have so much room for improvement.

JiU, she should work on her stability cause half of FH lives on shows she sounded like she was sick and had it hard to sing her lines at the BEGINNING of the song.

Dami and Dongie need to be more open. Handong is going well in this lately and I know we love Dami like this but she also need to be more open, talk more, make more jokes, interact more lol.

Also, I love JiU and SuA fake maknaes personalities but maybe make a bit less jokes? Maybe

Siyeon and Yoohyeon, I can't think of anything rn. You are doing fine sweeties

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Yeah I think they need to learn stage presence. Maybe that can develop over time but I miss how entertaining and hyped old YG groups were. 

I feel bad saying it but I wish BP would step up their performance a bit. I get it, they have zero say in when music gets released since they don't produce, they can't vlive when they want since they need a manager's approval but on stage... sometimes I feel like they are really bored performing and I know it's the same songs for months on end with no content but that's all the fans get too. 

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yeah, I think their songs are so disorganized and their verses are random. If they have a song that is consistent and organized, they will do well. We shall see with further releases. I want girl crush concept too rlytearpls.png  Black widow slays

Pristin: Come out with some songs with full girl crush concept rather than the repetitive sounds such as wee woo and dududu. I see a lot of potential in their dance and singing!

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Red Velvet

 

Irene: She is a great dancer and I considered her an excellent performer pre-Russian Roulette but I feel like she's been out of it these days, even though her dancing is still very good I think she's not really giving it her all when it comes to performances when she was arguably the 2nd RV member with the most stage presence after Seulgi with no big gap in between, I wish I could see the Irene from pre-Russian Roulette back, I wish Irene would perform to a 100% again because despite people constanly doubting her talent, she actually can be a great performer, also, her voice has the potential so I wish she could train her singing because I think she can indeed improve her singing skills a lot.

 

Seulgi: She's already a decent vocalist and an excellent performer, she's the 2nd best vocalist after Wendy and probably the most stable when it comes to singing and dancing at the same time, but the way she handles her high notes isn't exactly the healthiest and she can be nasal at times, I wish she could improve that aspect about her singing because the way she handles high notes could hurt her voice in the long run, she's still a decent vocalist but she definitely isn't on Wendy's level and there are some things to improve.

 

Wendy: She's an angel, one of the best if not the best vocalist of the new generation and always gives it her all on stage despite not being the best performer in the group, but despite all of this there are things I notice I would like to point out, her voice has been sounding tired for the past 2 eras which could be heavily related to her vocal cord nodules and aside from that she's also been getting sick a lot, I wish she would start taking more care of her health (And I wish SM would allow her to do that, because I put the blame mostly on them for it), and i'm also worried about her weight, I wish she gains some weight, also, her dance moves aren't particularly fluid so I wish she could improve that aspect of herself but Wendy always gives a 1000% on stage so I don't wanna get into details about that because she is already a hard worker.

 

Joy: When it comes to overall skills she is an all-rounder idol but she is behind Wendy and Seulgi in terms of singing, behind Seulgi and Irene in terms of dancing, I honestly don't think there is any Red Velvet member who is outstanding on rap so in that sense she's equal to Irene in my opinion, this is perfectly normal and fine but it results in her skills being overshadowed, but just like Wendy she is a hard worker who gives it her all and does her very best!

 

In 2016 I would mention sometimes she doesn't seem to have that much energy when it comes to performing but this year she's been enjoying herself a lot on stage so I can say she already improved on this aspect, Joy is a very nice performer and a decent singer, she's an all-rounder but just like Seulgi, there are things she has to improve when it comes to her vocals, she has great fear when it comes to hitting the higher notes when just like Wendy and Seulgi, she is capable of doing them so she has to work to overcome that fear because she is capable of doing them and her way of transitioning from one note to another is very similar to Seulgi, this is something they both have to improve on because although sometimes it sounds very nice, is far from being the healthiest way to handle it, and she is also nasal at times, her technicality is something she has to improve on but she's been consistently improving since debut maybe I can say she's getting there, her and Seulgi both.

 

When it comes to her acting, although I see a lot of potential in her in this department, she needs to control her eyes because she has the tendency of blinking a lot which exposes her when she's struggling to convey the feelings she has to, once she controls that she's all set to start working to build a good acting career for herself.

 

Yeri: I wish she would put more efforts into her performance, although some ReVeluvs consider her the third best dancer in RV for me she's the 4th best dancer because her movements are sometimes small and sloppily executed, she's more fluid than Wendy and hence consider her a better dancer but Wendy puts on more efforts when it comes to performing, I wish she had more energy on stage and I also wish she stopped lip-syncing so often, there are instances where this isn't the case but she doesn't sing loud so is difficult to notice her live singing.

 

Both her and Irene has improved their singing but they are not there yet.

 

I started writing when this thread barely had a reply but considering the amount of "new replies" windows that have popped up I bet this has multiple pages or at the very least 2.

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  • @Seulgi. you need to brighten up girl, if you dont work on those variety skills, all your talent will go to waste because you won't get the support you need!

 

@Yuri. Girl, you need to really work on your weight, it fluctuates too much and that's not healthy, one day you're stick thin and the other your arms are...above average for a female idol. you need to stop doing hard diets before photoshoots/comebacks and start to balance it all out throughout the year.

 

@Dahyun. if you're gonna be a rapper, you need to at least learn to rap, y'know. And you need to regain your old confidence, i don't know what happened to you but its affecting your popularity and if you hit #9 among the general public, you'll never get back up.

 

@Chaeyoung. Stop wearing those UGLY ASS extensions, you already know shoulder length is your best look, but you keep forcing that long hair so much but girl its tragic af.

 

@Jihyo and @Jeongyeon. Those contacts are so ugly, fucking BURN them, i don't even wanna see them again, Jeongyeon looks like a white old lady when she's wearing them

 

@Tiffany. Girl.... your throat is three seconds away from giving out, if you smoke, you should really quit it cause one of these days your vocal cords are gonna tear and you don't necessarily have any other talent to make up for it.

 

@Luda. okay bitch, you're in a 13th member group and you're easily the worst dancer and one of the worst singers, but you're pretty, you're cute and you have the "pocket demon" concept that could help you create an image for yourself but you need to try harder, like actually talking more during reality shows and try harder to build that character to make you stand out. You need to take advantage of reality appearances, do crazy shit to  MAKE SURE you appear in the final cut

 

@Mina. we all love your voice girly, but there's no point to it if it's gonna crack every 3 seconds. you need to work on your stability

 

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o my you wrote an essay

Red Velvet

 

Irene: She is a great dancer and I considered her an excellent performer pre-Russian Roulette but I feel like she's been out of it these days, even though her dancing is still very good I think she's not really giving it her all when it comes to performances when she was arguably the 2nd RV member with the most stage presence after Seulgi with no big gap in between, I wish I could see the Irene from pre-Russian Roulette back, I wish Irene would perform to a 100% again because despite people constanly doubting her talent, she actually can be a great performer, also, her voice has the potential so I wish she could train her singing because I think she can indeed improve her singing skills a lot.

 

Seulgi: She's already a decent vocalist and an excellent performer, she's the 2nd best vocalist after Wendy and probably the most stable when it comes to singing and dancing at the same time, but the way she handles her high notes isn't exactly the healthiest and she can be nasal at times, I wish she could improve that aspect about her singing because the way she handles high notes could hurt her voice in the long run, she's still a decent vocalist but she definitely isn't on Wendy's level and there are some things to improve.

 

Wendy: She's an angel, one of the best if not the best vocalist of the new generation and always gives it her all on stage despite not being the best performer in the group, but despite all of this there are things I notice I would like to point out, her voice has been sounding tired for the past 2 eras which could be heavily related to her vocal cord nodules and aside from that she's also been getting sick a lot, I wish she would start taking more care of her health (And I wish SM would allow her to do that, because I put the blame mostly on them for it), and i'm also worried about her weight, I wish she gains some weight, also, her dance moves aren't particularly fluid so I wish she could improve that aspect of herself but Wendy always gives a 1000% on stage so I don't wanna get into details about that because she is already a hard worker.

 

Joy: When it comes to overall skills she is an all-rounder idol but she is behind Wendy and Seulgi in terms of singing, behind Seulgi and Irene in terms of dancing, I honestly don't think there is any Red Velvet member who is outstanding on rap so in that sense she's equal to Irene in my opinion, this is perfectly normal and fine but it results in her skills being overshadowed, but just like Wendy she is a hard worker who gives it her all and does her very best!

 

In 2016 I would mention sometimes she doesn't seem to have that much energy when it comes to performing but this year she's been enjoying herself a lot on stage so I can say she already improved on this aspect, Joy is a very nice performer and a decent singer, she's an all-rounder but just like Seulgi, there are things she has to improve when it comes to her vocals, she has great fear when it comes to hitting the higher notes when just like Wendy and Seulgi, she is capable of doing them so she has to work to overcome that fear because she is capable of doing them and her way of transitioning from one note to another is very similar to Seulgi, this is something they both have to improve on because although sometimes it sounds very nice, is far from being the healthiest way to handle it, and she is also nasal at times, her technicality is something she has to improve on but she's been consistently improving since debut maybe I can say she's getting there, her and Seulgi both.

 

When it comes to her acting, although I see a lot of potential in her in this department, she needs to control her eyes because she has the tendency of blinking a lot which exposes her when she's struggling to convey the feelings she has to, once she controls that she's all set to start working to build a good acting career for herself.

 

Yeri: I wish she would put more efforts into her performance, although some ReVeluvs consider her the third best dancer in RV for me she's the 4th best dancer because her movements are sometimes small and sloppily executed, she's more fluid than Wendy and hence consider her a better dancer but Wendy puts on more efforts when it comes to performing, I wish she had more energy on stage and I also wish she stopped lip-syncing so often, there are instances where this isn't the case but she doesn't sing loud so is difficult to notice her live singing.

 

Both her and Irene has improved their singing but they are not there yet.

 

I started writing when this thread barely had a reply but considering the amount of "new replies" windows that have popped up I bet this has multiple pages or at the very least 2.

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