Spraw 216 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 Hi ! I just finished a mashup combining IOI's Whatta Man and Bang Bang by Jessie, Ariana and Nicki (which are two songs I really like). I wanted your opinion on it, pitch-wise, volume-wise, rythm-wise, anything, so that I can improve it ! And if you like it, well, I'm very pleased Here it is: Have a nice day everyone ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loy 1,619 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 Not an expert maybe after 0:39 you can put Nayoung~ Mamsoge jageun bulti baramman buneun nalti.. anyways all is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starsocks 7,986 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 Just some constructive criticism since you wanted it: -The transition into the first verse is a little crowded -I liked the bits where you layered the ad-Libs and backing vocals of one song to the main vocals and instrumentation of the other -Before the chorus, you should ideally only use the refrain from just one of the songs, not both -After the bridge it gets a little crowded (just after the Bang Bang high note) -The mixing should be a little more refined -The ending is GREAT Overall it's very, very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vikturi 1,631 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 I can't believe Pinky invented singing with peerless visuals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spraw 216 Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 Not an expert maybe after 0:39 you can put Nayoung~ Mamsoge jageun bulti baramman buneun nalti.. anyways all is good Do you mean within the chorus ? o: Thanks a lot ! Just some constructive criticism since you wanted it: -The transition into the first verse is a little crowded -I liked the bits where you layered the ad-Libs and backing vocals of one song to the main vocals and instrumentation of the other -Before the chorus, you should ideally only use the refrain from just one of the songs, not both -After the bridge it gets a little crowded (just after the Bang Bang high note) -The mixing should be a little more refined -The ending is GREAT Overall it's very, very good! Thank you so much it will indeed be very helpful, because I really intent on improving this mashup. Kinda satisfied with the ending too ! I'm very glad you enjoyed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starsocks 7,986 Posted June 13, 2017 Share Posted June 13, 2017 Thank you so much it will indeed be very helpful, because I really intent on improving this mashup. Kinda satisfied with the ending too ! I'm very glad you enjoyed it Now worries! And great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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