ThaumicTinkerbell 1,934 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Hello there, I am currently searching for one or two beta reader for a BTS longfic I'm writing. Summary (as for now, I'm not entirely happy with it yet) Jimin had a difficult youth that made him try to end his own life several times. Yoongi and Hoseok are a couple with a bright future ahead and dark past behind, but everything changes when Jimin starts to work in their cafe. The paths they were supposed to go in life are altering completely. Jimin is breaking down because of a one sided love while Yoongi is finding disturbing evidence of torture and child abuse and Hoseok is caught in his growing jealousy. Namjoon and Seokjin are trying to hold everything together but when Taehyung and Jungkook enter the scene, everything falls apart entirely. The "problem" with it is that the storyline starts out pretty nicely, fluffy and mysterious but turns out to be pretty fucked up, not fake angsty, but FUCKED UP.Most of my friends don't want to read it because of things like eventual character death, cheating, breakup, fucked up past, depression, everything going to shit, a bittersweet ending etc. so I really need someone I can talk to about it without any "emotional involvement", meaning that I need a partner in crime for the thing I want to do with this fanfic.. And that is creating a glorious masterpiece that breaks your heart, while being awesome and not letting you drop it while doing so. If you are still reading and are interested, you will definitely need to be over 18 (probably better if you are around my age, in your early or mid twenties) and able to deal with messed up, graphic stuff as well as emotional shit, and no hope for a happy ending in the normal sense. And available though Line (or Skype). I need someone that is good with English grammar and punctuation, as well as someone who is honest to tell me their opinion on the logic and feeling of the storytelling. Feel free to dm me or reply here to get in touch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo 6,950 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Is there smut? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImAmazing 7,501 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 This sounds pretty serious. I hope you can feel satisfied with your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaumicTinkerbell 1,934 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 Is there smut? There are some explicit scenes scheduled but it's not mainly about that. More about the relationships between the characters and how they shift during the story. This sounds pretty serious. I hope you can feel satisfied with your story. I'm into stories that actually show ugly sides of life and how complicated human relationships and feelings can be, especially if you share a past and things change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo 6,950 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 There are some explicit scenes scheduled but it's not mainly about that. More about the relationships between the characters and how they shift during the story. I'll be your beta reader! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImAmazing 7,501 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 There are some explicit scenes scheduled but it's not mainly about that. More about the relationships between the characters and how they shift during the story. I'm into stories that actually show ugly sides of life and how complicated human relationships and feelings can be, especially if you share a past and things change. That really interesting and good luck!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaumicTinkerbell 1,934 Posted May 21, 2017 Author Share Posted May 21, 2017 That really interesting and good luck!! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkachi 147 Posted May 21, 2017 Share Posted May 21, 2017 Hello there, I am currently searching for one or two beta reader for a BTS longfic I'm writing. Summary (as for now, I'm not entirely happy with it yet) Jimin had a difficult youth that made him try to end his own life several times. Yoongi and Hoseok are a couple with a bright future ahead and dark past behind, but everything changes when Jimin starts to work in their cafe. The paths they were supposed to go in life are altering completely. Jimin is breaking down because of a one sided love while Yoongi is finding disturbing evidence of torture and child abuse and Hoseok is caught in his growing jealousy. Namjoon and Seokjin are trying to hold everything together but when Taehyung and Jungkook enter the scene, everything falls apart entirely. The "problem" with it is that the storyline starts out pretty nicely, fluffy and mysterious but turns out to be pretty fucked up, not fake angsty, but FUCKED UP. Most of my friends don't want to read it because of things like eventual character death, cheating, breakup, fucked up past, depression, everything going to shit, a bittersweet ending etc. so I really need someone I can talk to about it without any "emotional involvement", meaning that I need a partner in crime for the thing I want to do with this fanfic.. And that is creating a glorious masterpiece that breaks your heart, while being awesome and not letting you drop it while doing so. If you are still reading and are interested, you will definitely need to be over 18 (probably better if you are around my age, in your early or mid twenties) and able to deal with messed up, graphic stuff as well as emotional shit, and no hope for a happy ending in the normal sense. And available though Line (or Skype). I need someone that is good with English grammar and punctuation, as well as someone who is honest to tell me their opinion on the logic and feeling of the storytelling. Feel free to dm me or reply here to get in touch I will totally read this, as long as it's not just endless suffering and depression, but from what you described it sounds like it involves more complexity than that. Hit me up and I'll look over it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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