Tuis 864 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ir6BTCDstGM&feature=youtu.be I hope it has turned out well! Please share your comments!P.S: It's my first remix so... still lacks a lot!Anyways it's just club song now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
김민주 16,324 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 It sounds alright, but it's too slow sounding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aripod 2,721 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 It's good for a first remix but some parts are off and a bit slow paced. Keep practicing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Athena 21,718 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 It's good but yeah it sounds a bit too slow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShawolSONEexo 2,135 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 It sounds alright, but it's too slow sounding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastMohican 208 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 This could have been mastered a little bit better. The tempo is a bit...off. It feels kind of dis-jointed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuis 864 Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 It sounds alright, but it's too slow sounding. Yes... I didn't change the original speed of the song because I though it would be more like the original... maybe I should've changed that... thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuis 864 Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 This could have been mastered a little bit better. The tempo is a bit...off. It feels kind of dis-jointed. You're right... Gonna work on it more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOfficialPimpwife 3,124 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I prefer the original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legacy1223 1,617 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Needs to be mixed down better. The bass synth is way too strong and over powers the vocals. You're using an acapella that was created by Phase Cancellation, that "acapella" sounds like shit, it always will, and it's noticeable in your track. That bass synth needs to sit better in the mix, throw some EQ and Compression on it and maybe a filter. It sounds kinda empty on some parts, and it's not that you need more sounds, you can make what you have work, you just need to mix it down a bit better. The final chorus line at 3:24 needs to be bigger, powerful vocals, but underwhelming beat. The entire track does sound off, like the tempo is wrong, but you're learning, and that's what's matters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuis 864 Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Needs to be mixed down better. The bass synth is way too strong and over powers the vocals. You're using an acapella that was created by Phase Cancellation, that "acapella" sounds like shit, it always will, and it's noticeable in your track. That bass synth needs to sit better in the mix, throw some EQ and Compression on it and maybe a filter. It sounds kinda empty on some parts, and it's not that you need more sounds, you can make what you have work, you just need to mix it down a bit better. The final chorus line at 3:24 needs to be bigger, powerful vocals, but underwhelming beat. The entire track does sound off, like the tempo is wrong, but you're learning, and that's what's matters. The bass synth is way too strong and over powers the vocals: Yes... You're right! I didn't notice it that much. Couldn't find a better acapella on youtube and I couldn't make a great one. nothing I can do. just gonna wish SM will release an acepella. "That bass synth needs to sit better in the mix, throw some EQ and Compression on it and maybe a filter." Completly right... will do that! It sounds kinda empty on some parts, and it's not that you need more sounds, you can make what you have work, you just need to mix it down a bit better. I get what you mean. but still lack good instruments... gonna search for some! The final chorus line at 3:24 needs to be bigger, powerful vocals, but underwhelming beat. yes... completely agree. The entire track does sound off, like the tempo is wrong, but you're learning, and that's what's matters. OMG your comments were awesome! I hope some day I can be a good one! I'll release the 2th version of Mr. Mr. with what you said and with different synths and instruments! again thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legacy1223 1,617 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 The bass synth is way too strong and over powers the vocals: Yes... You're right! I didn't notice it that much. Couldn't find a better acapella on youtube and I couldn't make a great one. nothing I can do. just gonna wish SM will release an acepella. "That bass synth needs to sit better in the mix, throw some EQ and Compression on it and maybe a filter." Completly right... will do that! It sounds kinda empty on some parts, and it's not that you need more sounds, you can make what you have work, you just need to mix it down a bit better. I get what you mean. but still lack good instruments... gonna search for some! The final chorus line at 3:24 needs to be bigger, powerful vocals, but underwhelming beat. yes... completely agree. The entire track does sound off, like the tempo is wrong, but you're learning, and that's what's matters. OMG your comments were awesome! I hope some day I can be a good one! I'll release the 2th version of Mr. Mr. with what you said and with different synths and instruments! again thanks a lot! No problem. The acapella can work, you just have to make it fit. EQ and Compression! Cut out some of those low mids a bit maybe (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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