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#21 gimme dat redue belbet

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:05 PM

You should've told fanfic writers to stop saying "their tongues battled for dominance"
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#22 laiceps

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:06 PM

"he run his tongue across the crook of his neck, feeling the salty taste"

 i see no lie but bad writing


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#23 sungjong

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:14 PM

Seems that the last fic you read has left you a bit....
 
 
https://media.tenor.co/images/2088aa8a44...
 
 
 
 
...Salty

lmao


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#24 baby bird

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:19 PM

I thought this was going to be about every character that falls in love with the main bully just because the bully says "I love you"


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#25 Jimins Sonyeo

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:39 PM

But wait...

If you can't handle salty sweat. You shouldn't read FF at all. It gets nastier.


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#26 aoiWings

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:41 PM

While we're on the topic: People should stop using orbs instead of eyes. It's like a disease among fanfiction writers. I've never even once seen a professional use it that way, but I have read entire fics where they didn't use the word "eyes" even once, the whole time it was like: "He stared into his dark orbs" "His beautiful orbs" etc. It's horrible. It sounds like instead of eyes they have some strange marbles in their eyeholes...

Even though the scariest thing is that I got so used to it by now, that I sometimes don't even notice it anymore...


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#27 Lovely Summer

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Posted 21 March 2017 - 01:09 PM

Seems that the last fic you read has left you a bit....


https://media.tenor.co/images/2088aa8a44...




...Salty


/cue CSI Miami themesong
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#28 ♔ Sana Minatozaki ♔

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Posted Yesterday, 05:13 PM

i taste heavenly 


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#29 Honestea

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Posted Today, 12:57 AM

Isn't the saltiness comes from sweat?
But yea, agree that skin tastes sweet rather than salty :dave:
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