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#1 secondgrade

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:46 PM

"he run his tongue across the crook of his neck, feeling the salty taste"

skin is not salty, i dont know what sodium based diet ur having but skin shouldnt have a taste
seriously.. just lick a bit of your own skin...is it salty?
NO!
stop this... it makes me cringe and feel sad cause thats the only thing i will remember of ur fic, even if it was good
k, thats all..
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#2 Honeystan

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:47 PM (Edited by Honeystan, 20 March 2017 - 03:47 PM.)

most skin is kinda salty 

 

 

skin I've tasted anyway hurrplz.png


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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:47 PM

Sweat is salty~


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#4 Liliana

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:48 PM

Maybe he took a dive in the Dead Sea...
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#5 Wanderess

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:48 PM

If they're sweating?


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#6 Honeystan

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:48 PM

Sweat is salty~

And they should be getting sweaty while doing the do, right? Salty skin sounds accurate to me ohbi.png


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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:48 PM

I thought you would say that fanfic writers should stop writing fanfics.

 

I was ready to up-vote

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:49 PM

And they should be getting sweaty while doing the do, right? Salty skin sounds accurate to me https://onehallyu.com//public/style_emot...

 

Yeah, I thought it was obvious~ 0u0plz.png


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#9 hatfelt

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:49 PM

Seems that the last fic you read has left you a bit....

 

 

raw

 

 

 

 

...Salty


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#10 Ston

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:49 PM (Edited by Ston, 20 March 2017 - 03:50 PM.)

 i actually licked myself for this afadsfdsa i taste horrible


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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:50 PM

And they should be getting sweaty while doing the do, right? Salty skin sounds accurate to me https://onehallyu.com//public/style_emot...


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#12 LilVermin

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:50 PM

photo-100885.gif?_r=1490025263 are you salty?


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#13 Cerulyn

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:51 PM

You played yourself, op.
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#14 burntpancake

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:52 PM

Seems that the last fic you read has left you a bit....

 

 

https://media.tenor.co/images/2088aa8a44...

 

 

 

 

...Salty


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#15 Sergeant_Im

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:52 PM

sweaty skin is salty


sweaty skin is salty


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#16 LuckyDay

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:52 PM

 

 i actually licked myself for this afadsfdsa i taste horrible

 

 

same here lol, I don't really taste like anything I know, it's a weird taste.


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#17 Free Heechul

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:55 PM

just live in any place near the sea for a little while and you'll see what salty skin means 

it gets into your pores, it's in the air you breathe


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Posted 20 March 2017 - 03:57 PM (Edited by wiaraewiwiarae, 20 March 2017 - 03:58 PM.)

Try licking a man during sex - he'll taste salty.

 

That sentence is meh though...


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#19 Laamaa

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:02 PM

That English :') But as mentioned before, sweat is salty


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#20 Jimins Sonyeo

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Posted 20 March 2017 - 04:04 PM

What do you mean its not salty?

*Licks her own hand*

Alright, my hand isn't salty, I wash them a lot turning day ...but my wrist is.

I think it's normal that end of the active day you would taste salty a bit :D or smth. Like tears, always salty :[]

 

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I would wanna lick Jimin sweat (only person in the world). It seems so gross but same time SO fascinating.0u0plz.png

I bet it tastes like candy chemical sh*t. Njommm :D


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