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most badly paced fan fiction of your faves you read?


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there's this taekook one I just finished rn and its so damn messy (sad cause the story basis/foundation was really good)

 

Its like Tae falls in love with photographer/heartbreaker Jungkook and the author makes it seem as if jungkook's breaking people's hearts for such a huge reason (spoiler: he's simply an asshole. like typical phake jerk)

 

its times like reading stories like this where you feel bad since the idea's great and the buildup is too but when you learn of the climax it just falls apart. (and the messiest part is Taehyung easily falls in love within a week like dddd)

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I read this Taekook one that started out super great, Kook was supposed to be inexperienced and he starts having this intense sexual relationship with Tae and it was kind of obvious that Jimin was the third wheel but then this great climax happened where Jimin confronts Kook out of jealousy and pretty much says that Tae's been fucking him too and what he has with Kook isn't special. It sounds stupid but it was really dramatic and awesome.

 

Then the fic wasn't updated for a while and when it was they way it continued was so stupid? Tae was like lets have a polyamorous relationship and I have nothing against that but the way it was handled was so stupid. Like after Jimin confronted Kook and he found out they'd been lying to him he was only mad for like two seconds and then willing to go along with it? Just parts of it were too hard to suspend disbelief like they were literally supposed to be hiding this relationship but yet they were asking Namjoon for advice on whether their poly relationship could work and he was like "I'm okay with it as leader" yet in the previous scene Tae when Kook tells him he asked Namjoon for advice he was like "my career's over, I'm done for." It was just really dumb.

 

 

Literally a quote from it

 

 

 â€œI suck your dick,†he stated in the simplest terms he could come up with, then swung his gesturing hands over to Jungkook, “and I suck your dick. We stay open about it. We talk so nobody feels left out, nobody feels like shady shit is going on when they aren’t there. Everybody gets their dick sucked; we’re all happy. The end.â€

 

He finished his lesson with a grand gesture, shifting up onto his knees and throwing his arms up towards the ceiling before taking a deep bow, the grand maestro of all things dick-related. Yes. He was proud of himself. He was doing a good thing this day.

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I read this Taekook one that started out super great, Kook was supposed to be inexperienced and he starts having this intense sexual relationship with Tae and it was kind of obvious that Jimin was the third wheel but then this great climax happened where Jimin confronts Kook out of jealousy and pretty much says that Tae's been fucking him too and what he has with Kook isn't special. It sounds stupid but it was really dramatic and awesome.

 

Then the fic wasn't updated for a while and when it was they way it continued was so stupid? Tae was like lets have a polyamorous relationship and I have nothing against that but the way it was handled was so stupid. Like after Jimin confronted Kook and he found out they'd been lying to him he was only mad for like two seconds and then willing to go along with it? Just parts of it were too hard to suspend disbelief like they were literally supposed to be hiding this relationship but yet they were asking Namjoon for advice on whether their poly relationship could work and he was like "I'm okay with it as leader" yet in the previous scene Tae when Kook tells him he asked Namjoon for advice he was like "my career's over, I'm done for." It was just really dumb.

 

 

Literally a quote from it

tragique.

 

polyamory getting fetishized Dodd

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 â€œI suck your dick,†he stated in the simplest terms he could come up with, then swung his gesturing hands over to Jungkook, “and I suck your dick. We stay open about it. We talk so nobody feels left out, nobody feels like shady shit is going on when they aren’t there. Everybody gets their dick sucked; we’re all happy. The end.â€

 

He finished his lesson with a grand gesture, shifting up onto his knees and throwing his arms up towards the ceiling before taking a deep bow, the grand maestro of all things dick-related. Yes. He was proud of himself. He was doing a good thing this day.

 

I need this fanfiction in my life holoy shuiet

 

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I need this fanfiction in my life holoy shuiet

 

url?sa=i&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=images&c

It's actually really great, especially the first part, but right now the author is having a shit fit and saying she's not going to continue it because she can't handle criticism and "haters" who wrote that polyamory is stupid/wrong in the comments.

 

https://archiveofourown.org/series/461290

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