Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 I'm not the biggest fan of Twice and I've never written a song where an emoticon is the song title xD but I wanted to challenge myself to a different style. what do you think? Please leave your opinion ~ Please read while playing the song or its boring Verse 1 Will he realize tonight. Will my pained heart survive. I dont know how to play, ba ba baby. I can't help but miss you when your eyes aren't focused on me!, oh the hours pass so slowly~ Surely by now you must know im into you. I am as obvious as a lit broadway, show show. But you don't ever notice, or maybe you lack interest, will I ever know. please can someone let me know.! Nananana... whats that evil glare you have looking my way, tell me are you mad I don't understand, I thought we were a perfect match. I love you so much Chorus I type out several texts for you every day. But why can't I send them your way, why do I get embarrassed all alone. One day you'll know, your heart will go, insane for my love but untill that moment baby. I'm like TT just like TT Crying within my heart, stop it now, stop it now. I'm like TT, just like TT Tell me when you'll be my baby. Verse 2. I dance on my own tonight. Nothing but me and this beat. But I can't clear my mind of ya ba ba baby~ Will I be able to move forward if my hearts rejected, i cant imagine what I'd do next. Hold me okay Call me your own girl from today You won't know what a true loyal girl feels untill im you're baby. Please don't look at anyone else Its just us both in this universe. It's not so hard to soften your pride and notice me. Nanannana~ I hope my persistence won't scare you off. It's just that you don't know, I won't let you go, I'm not like those other girls. I love you so much. Chorus They cant compare, to the respect I have for you. I will remain, through everything, any problems you have we will fight through. Coz I love you, i really do. I wonder when you'll show some compassion for me baby. I'm like TT just like TT Alone on this dark night, rescue me, rescue me. I'm like TT just like TT Tell me when you'll be my baby Bridge I wish only the best for you, it's just that my heart has become weak and blue. Like a wild pretty flower, we can grow and bloom now. So give me a chance, please can you give me one chance.~~! Chorus If you and me, combine we will set ourselves free. (Ourselves free~!) Baby you'll see, you're into me. You're lying to yourself, so believe. (So believe!) Your beating heart, you can restart. I know you've been hurt, but do not punish me baby. (Oh~) I'm like TT just like TT Crying within my heart stop it now stop it now. (Stop it now baby~) I'm like TT just like TT (Oh~) Tell me when you'll be my baby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Buddy 2,847 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 I feel like this a secret message to an OH user you like but your lyrics better than original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fool 2,878 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 damn you have a lot of free time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Author Share Posted January 18, 2017 damn you have a lot of free time It dont take me long too english versions tho this one for example only took me i think 20 minutes max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OIaM 1,360 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Pretty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CareBear08 7,527 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 I think it's awesome that you do something like this. I know how much effort goes into it. Many of your english versions are good. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ky711 60 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Some parts don't have enough syllables Ex:Surely by now you must know I'm into you And some parts have too many Ex: I type several message to you every day But some parts fit perfectly!! Ex:tell me are you mad I don't understand, I thought we were a perfect match. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B612 22,399 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 that's talent right there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hetappina 515 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Please send this to Jason Ray so he can do his English cover for TT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YGMatt 2,182 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Yas ! you have talent sis, the lyrics convey nicely from the Korean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akaya 1,477 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Now I want to hear you sing it, because it's hard to hear the timing of your lyrics without hearing someone well sing it. I do like them a lot, especially: "I am as obvious as a lit broadway, show show." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glassrose 421 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Nice lyrics you wrote there I hope someone sings for us with your lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Author Share Posted January 18, 2017 Some parts don't have enough syllables Ex:Surely by now you must know I'm into you And some parts have too many Ex: I type several message to you every day But some parts fit perfectly!! Ex:tell me are you mad I don't understand, I thought we were a perfect match. For those you will have to sing it slightly faster or slightly slower. So for I type 'several messages'this part sing it faster than them so it matches the music, or for the parts that are not enough sing them slightly slower or sound out the word So 'surely~' so sing out the ly~~ a bit longer. The lyrics I tried to match there's mostly I'll try edit ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Author Share Posted January 18, 2017 Now I want to hear you sing it, because it's hard to hear the timing of your lyrics without hearing someone well sing it. I do like them a lot, especially: "I am as obvious as a lit broadway, show show." Oh i actually did sing it too so I know it would make sense I guess it's hard to imagine. Thanks that line was only because of the 'show show' part xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Author Share Posted January 18, 2017 Some parts don't have enough syllables Ex:Surely by now you must know I'm into you And some parts have too many Ex: I type several message to you every day But some parts fit perfectly!! Ex:tell me are you mad I don't understand, I thought we were a perfect match. Sorry for requote lol but I just edited the parts and all parts to match is it better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LesCanapee' 26 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 its rare for me to give you a + but here you deserve it lol nayeon shook, gj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NARA. 1,708 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Gosh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 18, 2017 Author Share Posted January 18, 2017 Gosh What's wrong?!? :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SanaWanna 2,486 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Wow damn, promoting Twice / not being shady to Twice for the very first time, if i'm not mistaken. Anyway, nice lyrics, keep up the good work. Can't up vote cause run out of it today Cheers mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JihyoIsAQueen 787 Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Youryrics are good 👠Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 Nice lyrics, you should sing it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 19, 2017 Author Share Posted January 19, 2017 Wow damn, promoting Twice / not being shady to Twice for the very first time, if i'm not mistaken. Anyway, nice lyrics, keep up the good work. Can't up vote cause run out of it today Cheers mate! Yes first time lol But I made an apology thread here http://onehallyu.com/topic/456012-i-want-to-apologize-to-onces-and-twice/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
本 Anobae 本 130 Posted January 19, 2017 Share Posted January 19, 2017 this lyrics xdd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted January 19, 2017 Author Share Posted January 19, 2017 this lyrics xdd What does that even mean -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMiJu 1,858 Posted January 19, 2017 Share Posted January 19, 2017 You are talented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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