Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 I wrote an english version to this before here and for some reason people commented that it was sexual I didn't have that intention but that got me thinking maybe this song would suit being sexual... so I got my pen and pad and headphones and created this....Imagine that its exo's voice singing and rapping these lyrics while playing the song here, can you tell me what you think of them?? if you think they're good at ll?? pleease??!?!?!? this took me very quick I didn't put much effort into it so its okay if you think its lacking or bad. Verse 1Dread me now, cause I'm your nightmare..After this song is finished you'll be sweating and wet down there.Oh I don't want to, I'm pure and I love you.All these boring sayings tonight I don't want to hear them from you.Digging deep, into these burning urges and following this thirst, for you girl.I cannot hide this desire anymore, soon you're gonna feel it. (I'm feeling crazy)You feel me right, throughout this night you're not going to be able to keep track of time.Unlike other nights you'll feel alive.ChorusOhhh~ fuck me now, no time for teasing I want to hear you moan loud.Yoo~~ like an animals style, if you want a fairytail love you're in the wrong story alright.Feel it girl, feel me girl oh, (deep inside you.).I'm sorry if it hurts.But i want, i want you. (I'm harder then stone)And i cant control this urge.Like the moon that brightens the night sky.I'll lighten up your senses and your whole mind.Yes feel the hot sensation, let the animal within take over your whole soul toniiiight!!Verse 2Delightful taste, served up on your plate.Go rougher make me feel it, I want to explode in you.Oh my lady, go strip for me, i don't want to see your clothing.Yeah speed it up, get on the bed so we can fuck.Why the tears x3 ohDon't be scared x3Just heed my lead, heed my lead x2Just you and me, you and me x2In this dream x3now, moan and scream! x3ChorusGirl~~ I'll fuck you now, no time for teasing I want to hear you moan loud.Yeah~~ like an animals style, if you want it gentle then you have yourself the wrong man tonight.Feel it girl, feel me girl,, (deep inside you.)Forgive me if it hurts.But i want, i want you. (Im harder then stone)And i cant control this urge.BridgeMy girl I'm thirsty for your blood tonight (oh~~)Seeing your lips moving gets my alive (yeah~)My hearts racing out of control.And my body along follows.Take my hand and lets leave from this place.Hypnotized by your body and voice, I don't even have a choice.The greatest gift I've received, will be you toniiiightLike the moon that brightens the night sky.I'll lighten up your senses and your whole mind.Yes feel the hot sensation, let the animal within take over your whole soul toniiiight!!Chorus.(Ohhh~ fuck me now, no time for teasing I want to hear you moan loud.)Like the moon that brightens the night sky.I'll lighten up your senses and your whole mind.(Yoo~~ like an animals style)Yes feel the hot sensation, let the animal within take over your whole soul toniiiight!!Feel it girl, feel me girl oh, (deep inside you.)I'm sorry if it hurts.But i want, i want you. (I'm harder then stone)And i cant control this urge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNGGYU 2,323 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 edit: didn't see the 18+ warning, now I'm forever cursed, ah, my innocent eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kpopisnotmylife 5,014 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Your songwriting skills are amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasmin 888 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 i think they're way too explicit, like you could tone it down a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyo Hyemi 6,831 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 i see 18+, i click Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sdm 13,010 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 This is nasty but you write well lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GalaxunnieSuperOppa 5,997 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Why did I not see the 18+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shady Bora 2,041 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 well that wasted no time got straight to the point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hizu 6,868 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goodsync 761 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 lol this is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 "i'm harder than stone" though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTaeyongsWife 3,748 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 I'm wet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HYUNNlE 3,039 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 this is pretty cool lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted November 6, 2016 Author Share Posted November 6, 2016 i think they're way too explicit, like you could tone it down a bit. I agree .. the second verse was a bit much lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted November 6, 2016 Author Share Posted November 6, 2016 I'm wet Really maybe you should check out the one I did to 7th sense some time http://onehallyu.com/topic/323670-the-7th-sense-nct-u-english-version-i-wrote-what-do-you-think/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted November 6, 2016 Author Share Posted November 6, 2016 "i'm harder than stone" though Did that sound silly? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceprince 2,268 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasmin 888 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 I agree .. the second verse was a bit much lol because i mean overall it's really good, i even sang it over the song and it fits the rhythm but the lyrics were too much in some parts. but it's a great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted November 6, 2016 Author Share Posted November 6, 2016 edit: didn't see the 18+ warning, now I'm forever cursed, ah, my innocent eyes I'm sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
violetvelvet 1,590 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Holyshit I swear EXO ruin me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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