[murder mystery] YG Must Die - Ending- [revelations on story and killer]

[HRH Ayyu]

 

 

YG roof top

 

 

B.i makes it to the roof top and sees Taehyun in the distance with YG, and seungri who has his katana ready, looking down at the crowed below.

 

 

B.I slowly walks up to them grasping his knife

 

B.I: "who is the killer!? IS IT YOU SEUNGRI!! DID YOU KILL JENNIE!!"

 

Seungri turns to B.I, steping infornt of YG pointing his katana at B.I

 

seungri: "calm down, ive been with YG the entire time, i didtnt kill anyone."

 

 

 

Taehyun: "now we both know that aint true.."

 

seungri: "it appears that you are off your meds and delusional  Taehyun, so im going to let that comment go. You arent even suppose to be here. why are you here?."

 

Taehyun: "she came to me in a dream, thats never happened before, she knew someone was planning something terrible., she didnt tell me who then cause she was trying to protect him. ive talked to her before but she could never remember her death untill recently."

 

Seungri:" ....what are you..."

 

AKMU stumble into the rooftop

 

Suhyun:" B.I you arent dead! ..Thank god......but why do you have a knife?"

 

B.I points the knife at chanhyuk 

 

B.I: "Was is you!!?"

 

Taehyun: "dont worry B.I, the star of this horror movie is approaching.everything will be made clear."

 

 

on cue a figure emerges from the smoke,

 

 

 

Smiley approches from door weilding a electric saw.

 

AKMU runs towards the others while B.I and seungri aim their weapons at smiley.

 

Smiley:"geeeze, had this whole ending planned out, "

 

 

smiey takes off his mask

 

 

 

 

G dragon is smiley

 

GD: "i thought about a thousand diffrent way i was going to kill you, but my rage would never be satasfied."

 

suhyun: "what! i saw you die!!!"

 

YG: "GD...............why?????you were like my son, i never did anything ..all ive ever done is delay comebacks.."

 

GD: "LIAR!!!!!!! "

 all these years, i worked hard for you, made YG, MADE YOU. everyday i would come here talking to you, laughing with you while all this time you were the one who killed her!!!! KILLED SOOMIN!"

 

YG: "soomin died by accidently, falling down the stairs when she was visitng you back when you were a trainee!!"

 

GD SCREAMS: "LIARRRRRR!!!! SHE WAS PUSHHHEDDDD!!"

 

GD starts his electric saw.

 

GD: "SHE TOLD ME, I SAW HER GHOST, SHE TOLD ME SHE WAS PUSHED! I LOVED HER!! I WAS GOING TO GIVE IT ALL UP JUST TO BE WITH HER, NONE OF THIS SHOULD OF EXSISTED, BIGBANG, IKON, WINNER 2NE1. YG ENTERTAINMENT WOULDNT OF BECOME SO BIG WITHOUT ME.! I MADE ALL OF THIS!!! SO IM GOING TO TAKE IT ALL AWAY!!! IM GOING TO TAKE AWAY EVERYTHING, YOUR ARTISTS, YOUR PRIDE, YOUR FORTUNE." 

 

GD takes a big breath and is suddenly very calm.

 

 

GD: "im going to take away your life."

 

B.I: "You killed jennie!! cause of what YG did???, you`re no better!!, we have the majority motherfucker! and we arent going to lie down and die."

 

GD: "no that was Tablo,. should of never bothered with that coward. you can only get so far with blackmail.he was emmezzling YG funds for years.

he was getting cold feet and was going to spill it all to teddy, we managed to convince him to inject the poison into jennie before we killed him ."

 

 

chanhyuk  sunddenly kicks seungris hand, throwing the katana on the ground.

 

seungri: "wtf."

 

chanhyuk grabs the katana quickly and moves back to GD. while pointing the katana at the group.

 

 

suhyun: "whh....what you doing, get back over here "

 

Taehyun: "chankyu was his acomplice.,"

 

suhyun: "...what...no.."

 

GD: "chankyu was the one you saw kill me.we staged it for you. originally i planned to say i survived by playing dead with the bodies." 

 

YG: "thats why the bodies where being hid, to hide the fact you werent dead.."

 

Chankyu: "this place is full of sinners. money, drugs, murder. this place needed to be purged for the sake of your soul suhyun"

 

 GD: "starting the fire wasent part of the plan chankyu."

 

Taehyun: "no that was me, ah poor mino. that will always be on me. "

 

GD: "i guess we have no choice but turn this into a blood bath, you have 3 options, be cut up, burn to death or jump of the edge!"

 

 

Taehyun: "but GD you have made a terrible mistake.......it wasent YG that pushed soomin."

 

 

GD: "SHUT THE F UP!!! BULLSHITT ALL YOU WANT BUT I SAW SOOMIN AND SHE TOLD ME, IT COULD BE NO ONE ELSE!!"

 

 

 

Taehyun: "ever since i was a child i had this gift, a gift that allows me to see and talk to ghosts. ever since i became a trainee ive made friends with the ghost of soomin., she could never remember the momment she died. but she told me today that he got some of her memory back a few weeks ago, and she gathered all her energy to appear infront of you on the stairs. she told you she was pushed. but it was only yesterday she remember who pushed her.

 

 

It was seungri."

 

 

Everyone turns to look at seungri.

 

Seungri shrugs.

 

Seungri: "you are all so over dramatic. bitch please GD , if soomin didnt die you would of given up being YG trainee and i gurantee you that a few months after she would of dumped your ass. she was probably only dating you cause you were little GD, the up and coming YG rapper. You werent pretty back in those days. Then you would of had nothing. "

 

seungri looks at YG.

 

seungri: "ive always had your back, the companies back, yes i was at times jealous of GD, but i knew...i KNEW he was one of a kind, someone born to be something great. i wasent going to let some groupie destroy that. YOU should thanking me!!! i basicly saved YG fututre!! I SAVED YOURE FUTURE!!!! YG WOULDNT BE WHAT IT IS IF I DIDNT PUSH HER!

 

 

 

YG:"....you..."

 

GD without warning runs towards seungri with his electric saw.

 

 

seungri acreams in agony with his leg sawed off.

 

 

GD: "its over....leave,"

 

chanhyuk: "WHAT!!! this doesnt change anything."

 

GD throws his electric saw to B.I

 

GD:" i have no intention of living past tonight do what you want,"

 

GD starts to dragg seungri who is screaming towards the door of the roof and the fire.

 

GD: "may the fire wash away our sins."

 

 

 

The fire i approching quickly, making it hard to breath when the first fire fighter appears at the edge,

 

YG:"suhyun go first."

 

suhyun grabs on to the fire fighter and they slowly make their way down the·building via ladder.

 

chanhyuk : "you are all sinners!!!!"

 

chanhyuk weilds his katana, runing towards Taehyun

 

Taehyun moves to the side

 

chanhyuk FALLS PAST, RIGHT OFF THE BUILDINg.

Chankyu is dead.

 

 

B.I starts climbing down the ladder.

 

Taehyun and YG can barely breath and the heat is starting to burn their skins,

 

YG:" i failed.... i didnt know....... what was happening .....under my roof."

 

Taehyun: "its not your fault.not yours and not soomin, its okay soomin, you can finally rest!"

 

Taehyun starts to climb down the ladder

 

Taehyun: "YG lets go!!"

 

 

YG has fallen unconcious due smoke, by the time the fire fighter made his way back, the fire has already consumed YG.

 

 

 

YG IS DEAD.

 

 

survivors:

 

suhyun

 

B.I

 

Taehyun

 

 

 

Thanks for playing

 

 

 

 

[Clay]

GD ?

 

 

what the fuck

[HRH Ayyu]

GD ?

 

 

what the fuck

Someone guessed it all right

[indecisive_me]

Someone guessed it all right

 This game was so much fun  

[Clay]

Someone guessed it all right

 

but didnt he die hnn

[bbangjyjbapshineelove]

lol...I should have kept my first guess.  I would have been closer.  I knew Taehyun was a red herring!

[HRH Ayyu]

 This game was so much fun  

im glad some enjoyed it.

 

its am improvement of sm fright night but the clues on who diedLnext got burried with the subplots and killer motives,

 

so i understand it was super hard for the majority,

 

but i hope it was entertaining atleast.

 

 

lol

[HRH Ayyu]

but didnt he die hnn

 

he faked it,

 

and the girls voice last chapter said,

 

 

"i told my love i was pushed"

 

"my love didnt die, it was all a lie".

 

 

and the killer was hidding all the murder victims bodies for a reason.

 

 

The whole story was basicly driven about gd dead girl friend. left in clues in messages and Taehyuun,

[You Need Some Milk]

Lmao This was a mess but fun. You should do a JYP one next

[HRH Ayyu]

I will sort out the prizes in next few days, im abit busy tommorow and thursday,

 

Thanks for playing

[jeaniebaby]

woah, what have I stumbled upon...

[HRH Ayyu]

woah, what have I stumbled upon...

the ending lol.

 

it was a ending to a murder mystery.

 

Lmao This was a mess but fun. You should do a JYP one next

it was originally ment to be jyp must die but i couldnt work out a story,

 

 

i probably wont make another, writting and mystery im not very good at.lol.

 

i jusr really liked the idea of yg must die

[Mrs. Kang]

Clapping!!!

This was fun! It was my first time playing forum games.

Congratulations to the host! You were very creative with your story. Guessing the murderer was more fun then guessing the victims lol I got very confused with the tips. But I've got some experience now for next time.

I have so many questions tho

 

 

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[Anthropology]

Totally forgot to guess the killer

 

Oh well, great game! Love the ending

[HRH Ayyu]

Clapping!!!

This was fun! It was my first time playing forum games.

Congratulations to the host! You were very creative with your story. Guessing the murderer was more fun then guessing the victims lol I got very confused with the tips. But I've got some experience now for next time.

I have so many questions tho

 

 

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the guess who dies was method to keep people who didnt want t read too much engaged,.a game·anyone could join in and guess wihout readng every episode.,

 

you can ask me any questions,

 

i wrote alot to build up the murder. i dont think people would of readLit all withou guess the murde mini game befoere finale.

[HappyShinki]

ah I was so close. the part that hasn't crossed my mind was the ghost remembering who pushed her later. it seemed gd doesn't know about seungri pushing his gf so the ghost hasn't told him such a thing but has told taehyun about seungry being dangerous so it seemed to me the ghost saw seungri killing other people in the building...
It was fun I loved all the gifs in middle of story. mino's death was the saddest one and for two episodes I was waiting for B.I suicide in dressing room with the rope haha
I'll be waiting for your next mystery game  

[jeaniebaby]

 

i jusr really liked the idea of yg must die

 same.

[E S H E]

 

seungri: "wtf."

 

me too

 

It was a fun game to play though, I hope you host more of these!

[You Need Some Milk]

the ending lol.

 

it was a ending to a murder mystery.

 

 

it was originally ment to be jyp must die but i couldnt work out a story,

 

 

i probably wont make another, writting and mystery im not very good at.lol.

 

i jusr really liked the idea of yg must die

NOO you had such a good story! Maybe how it was written out wasnt up to your taste but the story was good. I can help you with it if you decide to do another one!!!

[HappyShinki]

the guess who dies was method to keep people who didnt want t read too much engaged,.a game·anyone could join in and guess wihout readng every episode.,

yeah I had so much fun with the guess who dies next part for these exact reasons, the last part was also fun but it required more detailed answer and more reading it was harder.

 

I'm currently checking on the sm fright night one. sad I hadn't have a chance to join that one. it seems fun with so many characters and I love how the gossips about each character is close to reality and you're good at writing little jokes in middle of a horror story

also your writing is very good no one expect a agatha christie level story

[DreamChazr]

Well done GM, very well-written and entertaining story, with just the right amount of mystery and cunning misdirection. There were so many elements making it easy for a less skillful writer to mess up and make contradictions, but you organized everything perfectly. 

 

You really should keep writing, it might become your greatest success one day, who knows? 

[DreamChazr]

By the way, are you going to post an explanation on all the clues and solutions?

[violetvelvet]

     

[Qiu]

thanks for the game ayyu, i rly enjoyed it!!

[HRH Ayyu]

By the way, are you going to post an explanation on all the clues and solutions?

Oh yeah lol.

Ill do it tommorow. I forgot about that.

 

Abd thanks for the earlier compliment