rainbowsoldier 1,604 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1169579 I just started it, its the first chapter ever! You guys check it out if you want although i am really not that good since english is not my mother tongue. I hope you guys like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laamaa 7,510 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 "Please Subscribe to read further chapters" This puts me off so bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainbowsoldier 1,604 Posted September 1, 2016 Author Share Posted September 1, 2016 "Please Subscribe to read further chapters" This puts me off so bad Oh sorry ill change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laamaa 7,510 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 Oh sorry ill change it. You don't have to. Just saying I usually don't read those. I might be alone in this though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainbowsoldier 1,604 Posted September 1, 2016 Author Share Posted September 1, 2016 You don't have to. Just saying I usually don't read those. I might be alone in this though. Its more like a fairytale type of fanfic. There is not something to be concerned about, but if it worries you that much. Its ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GalaxunnieSuperOppa 5,997 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 Bless you. A thread that isn't exactly like the others rn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laamaa 7,510 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 Looks like it could be a interesting story Your sentences are a bit weird sometimes, but it'll get better the more stuff you read & write probably. ALso, the < and > for convo's is a little weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapmon's Ahjussi Husband 2,299 Posted September 1, 2016 Share Posted September 1, 2016 I actually liked, it must be one of the few fanfic without SIX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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