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My first fanfic ever Contains Lesbian sexual content


KpopLover1986

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This is a fanfiction I wrote about Kim Boa and Bohyung from Spica and the rest of Spica and Tiny G <-- new group for people don't know But this is not meant for people that cringe it's very detailed and fully out there and I don't hide nothing back at all. Let me know how my details are. 

 

http://superkpoplover09.tumblr.com/post/70277095030/first-fanfic-25-rating-haha-for-sexual-advisory

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Why is it written... as a memory.. you know what I mean? It's not written with the character's development in mind. It's written as if you're retelling the story through word-of-mouth instead of with great details like a person experiencing it for themselves

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Why is it written... as a memory.. you know what I mean? It's not written with the character's development in mind. It's written as if you're retelling the story through word-of-mouth instead of with great details like a person experiencing it for themselves

LOL is it that realistic sounding it's just how my brain comes up with these things, blame my imagination lol. 

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LOL is it that realistic sounding it's just how my brain comes up with these things, blame my imagination lol. 

No I mean I can't read it because of the way it's written. It's missing lots of punctuation and grammar... it just needs to be edited

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  • 2 weeks later...

if you like i and co-author / proofread it for you.

 

i tried to read it but its gone. 

 

 

oh damn! well then, i suggest an editor or co-author

 

 

AH I know I suck at that punctuations and stuff, I never was really good with full writing and I'm from the states witch is sad.

 
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