Joji. 5,062 Posted May 28, 2016 Share Posted May 28, 2016 Listen here: https://clyp.it/nzmffa1b It started off as a remix to Genie (it's called Wish and you can literally sing Genie along to it) but I scrapped the vocals because they weren't clean. Tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nait Phoenix 56 Posted May 29, 2016 Share Posted May 29, 2016 I love everything, except the breakdown. It was kinda underwhelming compared to the epicness you create with the buildup. I think: spend a good chunk of time trying to add a nice, loud, and skysplitting lead synth melody in that breakdown! It needs a Zedd-like flavor to catapult it to the stars, because the elements are all there… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DECAYYY 239 Posted May 29, 2016 Share Posted May 29, 2016 I loved the buildup but the drop caught me off guard. What DAW did you produce this track with I can edit a few parts with u if you want Sent from my GT-I9305 using Tapatalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joji. 5,062 Posted May 29, 2016 Author Share Posted May 29, 2016 I love everything, except the breakdown. It was kinda underwhelming compared to the epicness you create with the buildup. I think: spend a good chunk of time trying to add a nice, loud, and skysplitting lead synth melody in that breakdown! It needs a Zedd-like flavor to catapult it to the stars, because the elements are all there… Wait do you mean the drop right? Yeah I felt like it was missing something but I wasn't sure what to fill it with/how to fill it. I need more practice I guess. I loved the buildup but the drop caught me off guard. What DAW did you produce this track with I can edit a few parts with u if you want Sent from my GT-I9305 using Tapatalk Yeah it kinda sucks lol. I use FL Studio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nait Phoenix 56 Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 Sorry, yeah the drop is missing a key lead synth element to make it soar… It's right there, too… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DECAYYY 239 Posted May 31, 2016 Share Posted May 31, 2016 Wait do you mean the drop right? Yeah I felt like it was missing something but I wasn't sure what to fill it with/how to fill it. I need more practice I guess. Yeah it kinda sucks lol. I use FL Studio. Id love to help in this track if you dont mind tbh, im bored af Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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