Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 Make sure to play the song with the lyrics because they're written to match the vibe without the song its not as complete, what do you think of them? would really appreciate any type of opinion, be harsh if you like Verse 1 Forgotten in abyss, along this endless pit, lies suffocating, urges to wonder back to you. Rejected by my most dear, defeated I remain here, a distant melody flows gently but is corrupting me. Along this battle with my heart, along with neverending tears I cry. I can't go, can't go on. Chorus Simply I miss you, broken I need you, how can I compete with my love when I'm empty, hear my calling baby~ open your eyes to me ~ A beautiful glow, shines on us both, even the heavens beg you to open your heart, A destiny awaits with you, but nothing without you ~ Verse 2 Owner of the purest soul, and that beautiful smile of yours, An obvious beauty radiates everything you touch. I had you closer to me then anything, the distance in time seems everlasting, I'm so lost, I beg you~ oh oh ~ Chorus Follow the faint thought, listen don't ignore. Hear the crushing sounds that destroy your past love, I can't come up with nothing, I can't relive for me ~ Like a theater, vivid you play, can I disappear from these impossible days, I can't climb up without you, cant walk on without you. Bridge To kiss you again, to stay up only with you talking through to sunrise, to look forward optimistically, leaving those taints of hurt way behind. I promise I'll make you happy, can I please get one more chance? I've got nothing except you to work on, to always make you laugh, listen here, I don't need another girl, only you ~!! Chorus You know I miss you, (oh~!!) you know I need you, how can I compete with my love when I'm empty, (empty~) hear my calling baby~ (baby~!) open your eyes to me ~ (oh ~~) A beautiful glow, shines on us both, even the heavens beg you to open your heart, ( soften your heart~) A destiny awaits with you, but nothing without you ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyoyeonisnotfood 4,206 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missa 7,410 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 you really have talent for writing lyrics good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Dead Bachelor 301 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 Wow good job, this is so nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
!SpammeR! 7,791 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 can't wait for your first album Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchronisationOfYourDebut 1,841 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 Omg that's beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teddy1123 83 Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 That's awesome Can you do Red Velvet one of these nights? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ripiaoppa 15,307 Posted May 4, 2016 Author Share Posted May 4, 2016 That's awesome Can you do Red Velvet one of these nights? I'm not familiar with writing from a girls view but thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MelanatedBeauty 13,663 Posted May 4, 2016 Share Posted May 4, 2016 This is really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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