Miyeon 13,114 Posted December 7, 2015 Share Posted December 7, 2015 anyone good at english can help me edit my essay please?(: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted December 7, 2015 Share Posted December 7, 2015 sure! thank you<3 I'll pm you(: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted December 7, 2015 Share Posted December 7, 2015 ghei :/ dont help her shes ghei :/ suck my ass u lil bitch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted March 29, 2016 Share Posted March 29, 2016 I WASNT IN CLASS FOR THIS LECTURE AND IM HONESTLY SOOO LOST IF ANYONE HAVE KNOWLEDGE ON THIS TOPID PLS HELP ME PLSPLSPLS T^T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted March 29, 2016 Share Posted March 29, 2016 Do you have the text? I assume by metaphors they mean concepts like "the melting pot" or "the salad bowl". The latter fits more with the nation. Yup! By text do you want the taxonomy text in textbook? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted March 29, 2016 Share Posted March 29, 2016 yeah that just so I know how they want you to explain it kk I'll PM you(: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted March 30, 2016 Share Posted March 30, 2016 (edited) does anyone wanna help me with the conclusion for this basic essay c: Prompt: While you may share common cultural identities with your family and close friends, your personal identity makes you different. Pick a cultural or social group you belong to and explain how your personal identity sets you apart. In your explanation define cultural, social and Personal Identity Edited March 30, 2016 by Miyeon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted March 30, 2016 Share Posted March 30, 2016 What taxonomy should I use for a garden salad?LOL omg sorry if I'm all over the place I'm doing 3 essays at the same time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted April 22, 2016 Share Posted April 22, 2016 I don't know what topic I should do my informative speech on urghhh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted May 4, 2016 Share Posted May 4, 2016 i have to do this interview assignment thing where i have to interview someone with a cultural that's different from their profession, and have encountered cultural conflicts n how you cope w it. anyone fits this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 can someone help me shorten this 1000 words article down to 700? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 Is it like cutting out words and rephrasing sentences? yup https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-0Y4mESRRomxPHZMATzxObo92Z9DNMwUVeghgqef0ZE/edit?usp=sharing :stare: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 I'm on mobile rn so I couldn't edit on docs, but I rephrased and cut some stuff out, it's like ~740 words here [Spoiler] How I Found Myself by Kari Parker. This story narrates a teenage’s life as a traveller during her High school days. She was inspired by a dream to embark on a journey abroad. Although Kari was a little bit tender as she is the only student from her High School. She went traveling by herself looking for the world and found herself instead. ANNOYED "It's not the end of the world." They would always say, constant reminders that the world was so much bigger than the confines of high school life. I hated hearing that. It was a phrase done to the point where the only response was mimicry, and theirs a scolding look. This phrase was meant for us teens of the 21st century, us teens whose world's ended where the latest school drama began. DELIGHTED Sophomore year brought the realization that the world was bigger than I ever could have imagined. All those ___ brochures recommended going abroad young, and, at the age of 16, I did. Traveling abroad was the single most defining moment of my teenage life; it taught me what adults had been trying to say for years. High school felt so life-defining, but the truth is the world is so big that you can always start over in a place where nobody knows you and your past decisions won’t haunt you. That lesson alone was satisfying, but little did I know the lessons didn't end there. Many travels with school and parents later in my life were wonderful and eye opening, but it wasnt until 3 summers ago when one of my adventures played teacher once more. WORRIED I convinced myself that all the semester abroad programs they'd been advertising for were too long for me, and the two week summer program at Oxford was no different. I couldn't just up and trapise across Europe, I had too many responsibilities, too many excuses, too much to lose. Yet on the day of the deadline, like a flipping switch, I decided to go. And in mid August I was strapped into an aisle seat, flying over the Atlantic. My first time travelling abroad was unfamiliar. But I met the other seminar students who I attended classes and later traveled the city with. It was unfamiliar, but it wasn’t lonely. In fact, that was the travel's lesson this time — just because I was alone didn’t mean I was lonely. RELIEVED On my last night in Oxford, everyone was tired. A night of dancing and liquor-infused ice cream sundaes followed by A day of exploring left us exhausted. But I had traveled all the way to the UK alone, eating McDonald’s in my room for dinner wouldn't cut it. And that's what motivated me to get dressed and venture out in search of somewhere to dine. I’d never sat at a restaurant by myself before, the thought scared me. But the fear didn't outweigh the depressing thought of eating McDs in solitude. I found a place -- a dimly-lit, lovely little restaurant whose name I can't recall -- and sat at a table across the bar and observed my surroundings. A wall of pretty-colored liquor bottles behind the bar. The bartender gliding from one end of the counter to the other, taking orders and joking with a patron. Yelps from the large party at the back of the restaurant where only sporadic candlelights lit smiling faces. With so much life around me, I wasn’t alone. No, in fact, I felt comfortable, happy, and happy because I was comfortable. Traveling alone gave me courage. Traveling alone forced me out of my comfort zone. Traveling alone proved that I can do it alone. COMPASSIONATE These are things I would’ve never known about myself had I not let all those excuses sink, had I listened to that voice that told me I needed a traveling buddy, that I wouldn't be fine on my own. The lesson wasn’t expected, but it was one I needed to learn. For traveling and for life. I’ll never forget how it felt to depart, sitting in the back of a black car on the way to JFK, excited and nervous for the adventure that before me. And I’ll never forget how it felt to return, having conquered a new fear and having learned another new lesson. Like I had been changed for good. I went looking for the world and I found myself instead. I can edit this out later if u want :lol: [/Spoiler] hope that helps :D i just saw this!!!!! thanks Pimo<3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyeon 13,114 Posted May 18, 2016 Share Posted May 18, 2016 (edited) Does anyone wants to help me extend my essay to make it longer? its 3 pages short n its due in 6 hours :))))] update: 1 more page and in 3 hours r u guys proud of me :") Edited May 18, 2016 by Miyeon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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