Spraw 216 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Hey everybody ! So as some of you may know the Takau dance team now (we've been doing some other dance covers such as Happiness here: http://onehallyu.com/topic/164596-red-velvet-happiness-dance-cover-by-takau/ or Mamma Mia here : http://onehallyu.com/topic/129733-kara-mamma-mia-dance-cover-by-beginners/), we've recently done a 4Minute cover of their latest song Crazy. We've made this group in January for fun, so our synchronization and moves might not be perfect, that's why we are awared they might be mistakes in it. However, it would really mean a lot if you could share your thoughts on the cover with us, so that we could improve in the future. So critics are welcomed ! Every kind but the harsh and pointless one, though, because even if the cover isn't the best you could find, we've still put a lot of work and time into it. That's why we would appreciate if you could justify your arguments if you think it really is catastrophic. Thank you ! p.s: Originally, the group is composed of 3 girls, but we welcomed a friend of us who really wanted to be a part of this cover: Xiu. She learned the choreo in just one day so please be indulgent with her. pp.s: Upcoming cover is SHINee's View ! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thotcahontas 5,149 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Constructive criticism: Unco-ordinated: Some of you looked lost and at some points it became messy during the switching of positions. Spend some time on group synchronization and pinpointing how to smoothly transition. Too lax on moves: Try dancing infront of mirrors during practice and try to sharpen your moves and work on fluidity. Movement: When you guys do some of the moves in the dance.. they arent executed as they should be for instance when it got to the kick out foot swing arm part... it looked like you were standing kicking water. When you watch the original dance make sure you have the dance downpact first and THEN you pay close attention to detail and add those in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____Vatouhâ„¢ 743 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 a nice attempt! i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spraw 216 Posted July 11, 2015 Author Share Posted July 11, 2015 Constructive criticism: Unco-ordinated: Some of you looked lost and at some points it became messy during the switching of positions. Spend some time on group synchronization and pinpointing how to smoothly transition. Too lax on moves: Try dancing infront of mirrors during practice and try to sharpen your moves and work on fluidity. Movement: When you guys do some of the moves in the dance.. they arent executed as they should be for instance when it got to the kick out foot swing arm part... it looked like you were standing kicking water. When you watch the original dance make sure you have the dance downpact first and THEN you pay close attention to detail and add those in Thank you for your detailed advices ! I agree we generally lack some practice and rigor in our covers, especially since we struggle to find a good and large mirror to practice in front of :/ We will take that in account, thanks again ! a nice attempt! i like it Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peach Toadstool 3,739 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Your acting skills tho The best is the one doing Hyuna part (Tamara), and the tall one (Audrey) comes second :3 The two other forgot few steps Which one are you? Overall, it was quite good for beginner I guess ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spraw 216 Posted July 11, 2015 Author Share Posted July 11, 2015 Your acting skills tho The best is the one doing Hyuna part (Tamara), and the tall one (Audrey) comes second :3 The two other forgot few steps Which one are you? Overall, it was quite good for beginner I guess ^^ Haha thank you xD I'm Audrey :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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