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edit: thanks to everyone!!! i got it!  :ahmagah:  :ahmagah: 

 

so im planning to use this video for a group assignment, but of course i have to sub it coz here nobody gets english (even me :cry:) im struggling because i cant understand english well, please  help me with the words i cant listen, plz plz ! :cry: i put blank spaces where i cant get the word and question mark where im not sure... :._.:

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZ5Vy9BgSeY

 

do you recognize me, very soon i will be your student
but i not always sit? in your clasroom
i will not take out a pencil or open a textbook
your grow up with books, i read it from a laptop, an ipad, a smartphone
i use the keyboard more than a pen
im a digital native, an active learner
 
why carry just a textbook when my ipad connects me to the world?
i want to know things all the time, and right away!
maybe the best price for cool shoes or where to hike the himalayas
 
to learn i look online, because the classroom isn't enough for me
not when i can see faces, hear voices and chat with people on the other side of the world
 
i want to learn about chinese history from someone in Beijing
my school has to keep up with me, not the other way around
i have more and more choices
 
when you were my age, no one have? heard about a charter school(what is this btw)
no one could imagine a virtual school, but it's projected that by 2019
half of all? high school courses will take place online
 
i use mobile devices to connect with friends, classmates and teachers
and when im more connected, im more interested
 
i dont buy music at the store, or movies, or books. i get them instantly online and ______
excite me, i share with friends. that's how i wanat my education to be
 
i need a degree even more than my parents 
i know it and so do my friends
but____________prepared
 
public ____schools are under huge budget pressures and traditional college is incrisingly? unaffordable
i dont want crush in debt?
if i can google the best choices for cool shoes  rest assured? ___best choice on? education
like 2 year intitutions and online courses where students like me have grown to be six million? ________
and when im older i want to keep learning
do you recognize me? very soon i will be changing the world
but i need you, if youre ready to help me i'll find you
but it's your challenge to keep up with me
 
im a digital native, an active learner
listen to me, ___ me
together we can create the future
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Do you recognize me? Very soon I will be your student.

But I will not always sit in your classroom.

I will not take out a pencil or open a textbook.

You grew up with books; I read from a laptop, an iPad, a smartphone.

I use a keyboard more than a pen.

I'm a digital native, an active learner.

 

Why [should I] carry just a textbook when my iPad connects me to the world?

I want to know things all the time, and right away!

Maybe the best price for cool shoes or where to hike the Himalayas.

 

[in order] To learn i look online, because the classroom isn't enough for me,

not when I can see faces, hear voices and chat with people on the other side of the world.

 

I want to learn about Chinese history from someone in Beijing;

my school has to keep up with me, not the other way around;

I have more and more choices.

 

When you were my age, no one had heard about a charter school. (I will explain charter schools below)

No one could imagine a virtual school, but it's projected that by 2019

half of all high school courses will take place online.

 

I use mobile devices to connect with friends, classmates and teachers,

and when I'm more connected, I'm more interested.

 

I don't buy music at the store, or movies, or books. I get them instantly online, and when they

excite me, I share with friends. That's how I want my education to be.

 

I need a degree even more than my parents.

I know it and so do my friends.

But will I be prepared?

 

Public grade schools are under huge budget pressures and traditional college is increasingly unaffordable.

I don't want crushing debt.

If I can google the best choices for cool shoes, rest assured I'll find the best choice of education,

like two year institutions and online courses where students like me have grown to be six million strong.

And when I'm older I want to keep learning.

Do you recognize me? Very soon I will be changing the world.

But I need you; if you're ready to help me, I'll find you,

But it's your challenge to keep up with me.

 

I'm a digital native, an active learner.

Listen to me, help me.

Together we can create the future!

 

 

 

(A charter school is a school that receives public funding but are run by private individuals or organizations. They are considered one of the best forms of alternative schooling because they tend to be run better than regular public schools in the inner cities).

 

Let me know if you have any questions!

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do you recognize me, very soon i will be your student
but i not always sit in your clasroom
i will not take out a pencil or open a textbook
you grow up with books, i read it from a laptop, an ipad, a smartphone
i use the keyboard more than a pen
im a digital native, an active learner
 
why carry just a textbook when my ipad connects me to the world?
i want to know things all the time, and right away!
maybe the best price for cool shoes or where to hike the himalayas
 
to learn i look online, because the classroom isn't enough for me
not when i can see faces, hear voices and chat with people on the other side of the world
 
i want to learn about chinese history from someone in Beijing
my school has to keep up with me, not the other way around
i have more and more choices
 
when you were my age, no one had heard about a charter school(what is this btw)
no one could imagine a virtual school, but it's projected that by 2019
half of all high school courses will take place online
 
i use mobile devices to connect with friends, classmates and teachers
and when im more connected, im more interested
 
i dont buy music at the store, or movies, or books. i get them instantly online and when they
excite me, i share with friends. that's how i want my education to be
 
i need a degree even more than my parents 
i know it and so do my friends
but will I be prepared?
 
public grade schools are under huge budget pressures and traditional college is increasingly unaffordable
i dont want crushing debt
if i can google the best choices for cool shoes, rest assured I'll find the best choice in education
like 2 year intitutions and online courses where students like me have grown to be six million strong
and when im older i want to keep learning
do you recognize me? very soon i will be changing the world
but i need you, if youre ready to help me i'll find you
but it's your challenge to keep up with me
 
im a digital native, an active learner
listen to me, help me
together we can create the future
 
this is corrected. will edit with proper grammar and stuff

 

thanks thanks! no problem about the grammar, its a raw, im goona translate it in spanish

thanks and +1

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do you recognize me, very soon i will be your student

but i not always sit in your clasroom

i will not take out a pencil or open a textbook

you grew up with books, i read from a laptop, an ipad, a smartphone

i use a keyboard more than a pen

im a digital native, an active learner

 

why carry just a textbook when my ipad connects me to the world?

i want to know things all the time, and right away!

maybe the best price for cool shoes or where to hike the himalayas

 

to learn i look online, because the classroom isn't enough for me

not when i can see faces, hear voices and chat with people on the other side of the world

 

i want to learn about chinese history from someone in Beijing

my school has to keep up with me, not the other way around

i have more and more choices

 

when you were my age, no one had heard of a charter school

no one could imagine a virtual school, but it's projected that by 2019

half of all high school courses will take place online

 

i use mobile devices to connect with friends, classmates and teachers

and when im more connected, im more interested

 

i dont buy music at a store, or movies, or books. i get them instantly online and when they excite me, i share with friends. that's how i want my education to be

 

i need a degree even more than my parents 

i know it and so do my friends

but will i be prepared?

 

public grade schools are under huge budget pressures and traditional college is increasingly unaffordable

i dont want crushing debt

if i can google the best choice for cool shoes, rest assured i'll find the best choice of education

like 2 year institutions and online courses where students like me have grown to be six million strong

and when im older i want to keep learning

do you recognize me? very soon i will be changing the world

but i need you, if youre ready to help me i'll find you

but it's your challenge to keep up with me

 

im a digital native, an active learner

listen to me, help me

together we can create the future

 

If you have any questions about what any of this means let me know  :) I have an idea of what a charter school is but I'm looking it up to make sure 

Ok basically a charter school receives public funding just like a public school does but they operate separately from their area's public school system. So let's say you live in New York City and the NYC public school system makes a rule that school has to start at 7 in the morning. If you go to charter school, they could still start at 8 or 9. That's just an example I'm not really sure about specifics

Y yo se un poco de espanol si necesitas ayuda con la traduccion!

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If you have any questions about what any of this means let me know  :) I have an idea of what a charter school is but I'm looking it up to make sure 
Ok basically a charter school receives public funding just like a public school does but they operate separately from their area's public school system. So let's say you live in New York City and the NYC public school system makes a rule that school has to start at 7 in the morning. If you go to charter school, they could still start at 8 or 9. That's just an example I'm not really sure about specifics
Y yo se un poco de espanol si necesitas ayuda con la traduccion!

 

thanks thanks! i think here in my country that doesnt exist but well i think i may omit that from the video he! if i need help with spanish ill pm,but i trust my spaish since its my native language hehe :lol:

 

I can help you translating to Spanish if you need that

thank u in advice, omg so many kind people :rlytearpls:  if i have any doubt ill pm

 

thanks again

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thanks thanks! i think here in my country that doesnt exist but well i think i may omit that from the video he! if i need help with spanish ill pm,but i trust my spaish since its my native language hehe :lol:

 

thank u in advice, omg so many kind people :rlytearpls:  if i have any doubt ill pm

 

thanks again

It says on Wikipedia they exist in Chile if that's your country lol

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charter_school

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do you recognize me, very soon i will be your student

but i not always sit in your clasroom < Sit is the right word, but there are some grammar and spelling issues with this.
i will not take out a pencil or open a textbook
your grow up with books, i read it from a laptop, an ipad, a smartphone
i use the keyboard more than a pen
im a digital native, an active learner
 
why carry just a textbook when my ipad connects me to the world?
i want to know things all the time, and right away!
maybe the best price for cool shoes or where to hike the himalayas
 
to learn i look online, because the classroom isn't enough for me
not when i can see faces, hear voices and chat with people on the other side of the world
 
i want to learn about chinese history from someone in Beijing
my school has to keep up with me, not the other way around
i have more and more choices
 
when you were my age, no one have? heard about a charter school(what is this btw) < Have should be had, and basically a charter school is basically a school that receives public funding but operates independently of it's local school system.
 
no one could imagine a virtual school, but it's projected that by 2019
half of all high school courses will take place online < This is correct.
 
i use mobile devices to connect with friends, classmates and teachers
and when im more connected, im more interested
 
i dont buy music at the store, or movies, or books. i get them instantly online and _______ < The video says "when they"
excite me, i share with friends. that's how i wanat my education to be
 
i need a degree even more than my parents 
i know it and so do my friends
but____________prepared < The video says "will I be"
 
public ____schools are under huge budget pressures and traditional college is incrisingly? unaffordable < Grade should be put in the blank, and "incrisingly" is spelled "increasingly"
 
i dont want crush in debt? < This sounds more like "crushing debt" to me, it's hard to understand this part.
if i can google the best choices for cool shoes  rest assured? ___best choice on? education < I'll find the should be in the blank, and she's saying "best choice of education", but IMO either should work.
 
like 2 year intitutions and online courses where students like me have grown to be six million ________ < The bolded part is correct, and "strong" should be put in the blank.
 
and when im older i want to keep learning
do you recognize me? very soon i will be changing the world
but i need you, if youre ready to help me i'll find you
but it's your challenge to keep up with me
 
im a digital native, an active learner
listen to me, ___ me < "Help" should be used in the blank
together we can create the future
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It says on Wikipedia they exist in Chile if that's your country lol

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charter_school

hehehe chile is the one that won the america cup  :datass:  my country is the one that sucks at soccer :cry: peru

 

 

 

 

thanks, im im gonna correct that part on spanish translation, thanks again

 

ah lol i already edited it. i included stuff about charter schools too. good luck with your project!

thanks again! i just can use my PROMT translator with correct grammar lolol :lol: thanks 4 the luck!

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