sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 I have to write a scenario for a TV ad. The ad is supposed to be about a new bus line. I've been putting it off for the past few days and I need to turn it in soon, but I have no ideas since I have the creativity of a rock. I honestly can't think of anything, so if anyone has an idea please share it here. Keep it realistic, please. Also if you can think of some references, like music videos, films/tv shows or other ads, post it here, since I need to list references too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaa 224 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 First the bus arrives. A hot girl called Wendy gets in. It advertises how hot a passenger on the new bus line can be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 First the bus arrives. A hot girl called Wendy gets in. It advertises how hot a passenger on the new bus line can be. Hahaha, that's creative, but I need to advertise the bus, not the passengers lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gloupipoo 1,619 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 how old are you and what grade are you in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaa 224 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Hahaha, that's creative, but I need to advertise the bus, not the passengers lol.It kind of advertises the bus. More people will want to travel by it because of the hot people there!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senpie 1,663 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 When you say bus lines are you talking about bus routes? Or like a bus model? Umm a person/emotion-centered experience always sells well. Can you tell a story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 how old are you and what grade are you in I'm a freshman at uni Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thotcahontas 5,149 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Okay so I'm thinking safety is important. A bad ass chick steps onto the bus and the bus' floors are literred in condoms. There's a hot innocent stranger as the bus driver someone who looks pure.. like a xiumin! The girl sits down on his lap some moans sounded as that rendition from 50 shades of grey sound track crazy in love plays some moans small clips of her lips by innocent guys ear, her gripping his seatbelt and buckling it, the bus jerking making the ride seem rough and then he goes "Xyz bus line even through rough rides we keep you safe." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 When you say bus lines are you talking about bus routes? Or like a bus model? Umm a person/emotion-centered experience always sells well. Can you tell a story? Bus routes, not the model. Like there's a new bus line or whatever you call it that goes from place A to place B. I honestly could write decent essays and stories when I was younger, but it seems like I lost all of my creativity xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 Okay so I'm thinking safety is important. A bad ass chick steps onto the bus and the bus' floors are literred in condoms. There's a hot innocent stranger as the bus driver someone who looks pure.. like a xiumin! The girl sits down on his lap some moans sounded as that rendition from 50 shades of grey sound track crazy in love plays some moans small clips of her lips by innocent guys ear, her gripping his seatbelt and buckling it, the bus jerking making the ride seem rough and then he goes "Xyz bus line even through rough rides we keep you safe." Lol, props to you for creativity, I'm guessing you write fanfics But I don't think I can turn that in, I mean I can but I need a passing grade xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thotcahontas 5,149 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Lol, props to you for creativity, I'm guessing you write fanfics But I don't think I can turn that in, I mean I can but I need a passing grade xD ;) #promotionti http://www.wattpad.com/story/530555-commercial-boys-boyxboy . http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/456962 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 It kind of advertises the bus. More people will want to travel by it because of the hot people there!! Hmm, myb I can play with that lol. The slogan would be something like "only attractive people ride this bus, if you wanna get laid this is the bus for you!". Doubt my professor would like it though xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 ;) #promotionti http://www.wattpad.com/story/530555-commercial-boys-boyxboy . http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/456962 Haha, you so naughty! But I'm a dude lol. Be sure to let me know when you write a dirty lesbian fanfic though, possibly with SNSD in main roles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thotcahontas 5,149 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Haha, you so naughty! But I'm a dude lol. Be sure to let me know when you write a dirty lesbian fanfic though, possibly with SNSD in main roles. Will do ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaa 224 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Hmm, myb I can play with that lol. The slogan would be something like "only attractive people ride this bus, if you wanna get laid this is the bus for you!". Doubt my professor would like it though xD Lol, if you come up with nothing else its good enough :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destiny's waifu 8 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 well since its for a bus line (wtf) i'd just put in a glorious scene with the destination and loads of fireworks and happy couples so everyone knows it's a happy wonderful place and would want to go there yay <356 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBrick 168 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 A guy is late to catch the bus pulling away from the stop. As he chases it down with bag in hand, the bus stops and the door opens. A friendly driver welcomes him aboard...hmm...this one would be more emotional. Like, as he rides the bus, there is a beautiful view of the skyline as they leave the city towards home, and there is inspirational music in the background. Maybe the guy is rushing home to tell his children 'goodnight' before they go to bed. Or something... I feel like it could be a story about this one person doing multiple things in one day, constantly utilizing the bus and its services. Like, maybe the person is holiday shopping, or, planning a party of some sort, and the person keeps getting the same bus driver, but a whole group of different people (maybe a family, workers, different funny characters) on the bus. Or maybe the person is testing out the bus system and tries to beat the bus to each stop, but the driver is already there, each time, with completely new people on the bus, confusing the person constantly. I don't know, I think that could be made funny if you elaborate on it. And the key line could be about quick, dependable service. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sillysone 6,340 Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 A guy is late to catch the bus pulling away from the stop. As he chases it down with bag in hand, the bus stops and the door opens. A friendly driver welcomes him aboard...hmm...this one would be more emotional. Like, as he rides the bus, there is a beautiful view of the skyline as they leave the city towards home, and there is inspirational music in the background. Maybe the guy is rushing home to tell his children 'goodnight' before they go to bed. Or something... I feel like it could be a story about this one person doing multiple things in one day, constantly utilizing the bus and its services. Like, maybe the person is holiday shopping, or, planning a party of some sort, and the person keeps getting the same bus driver, but a whole group of different people (maybe a family, workers, different funny characters) on the bus. Or maybe the person is testing out the bus system and tries to beat the bus to each stop, but the driver is already there, each time, with completely new people on the bus, confusing the person constantly. I don't know, I think that could be made funny if you elaborate on it. And the key line could be about quick, dependable service. Thank you so much, I can really work with those ideas. Thanks, once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBrick 168 Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 Thank you so much, I can really work with those ideas. Thanks, once again. You're welcome! Good luck with everything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jcey 7,752 Posted April 30, 2015 Share Posted April 30, 2015 Its a hot day. A spoiled brat's expensive car breaks down. She unwillingly gets into the brand new empty bus and sits down as she has no other choice. Her good looking car driver who was with her sits down and takes out a handkerchief to wipe her sweat. Seeing that the bus driver turns the ac on. She relaxes and finds the seat more comfortable. The car driver starts dozing off. The bus starts moving and she starts to enjoy the view. The bus stops at A stop. A magician walks in doing magic. Then a clown, a lovely old couple, Two kids with school dress on, a cool guy listening to music , etc . Then a teenager leaves his seat for a pregnant lady when she enters and holds on to hanging hand rails. The bus comes to a Stop and her goodlooking driver suddenly wakes up from his sleep. The brat girl gets excited and at the same time curious as to who might come in next but her driver tells her its their stop and they need to get down. The next day the goodlooking driver gets the car ready but she refuses and decides to take the bus instead which comes exactly on the right time as shown on thw board of the busstop. The last scenes will be of her in the bus and HOt Jr walking in, smiling and taking a eat next to her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♩ ♪ ♫ ♬ 730 Posted April 30, 2015 Share Posted April 30, 2015 probs think of key points to advertise the bus line then overdramatize everything like: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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