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Doesn't have to be fanfiction. Hell, it could be published.

 

 

"And finally she walked up to him moving slightly closer to the screen and smiling towards the screen almost as if she could actually see me. It felt strange. I felt as if she could actually see me!" - Z AI creepypasta

(Unfortunately, the creepypasta Wiki got rid of it, but I have a video if anyone wants to laugh at the whole thing.)

 

"She dried off the water with a towel, which then became wet"

"She grabbed the door and flung it open, revealing shirtless Torolf (which was seriously his name) quivering with desire in the hallway."

-both from Rough and Ready 

 

The entire Luchains and Taebama fanfics

 

"The elevator whisks me at terminal velocity to the twentieth floor." - 50 Shades of Grey

Terminal velocity only goes down.

 

The entire Baekyeon fanfic where Taeyeon pegs Baekhyun (I can't find it!)

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Some stories on wattpad are just cringe-worthy, especially paronormal stuff.

And I just recently read book called 'Obsidian' - that book is just so bad. English is not my first language but I would write this shit better.

 

And ofc 50 shades of Grey.

Twilight is not that bad actually. The story is just ridiculous - sparkling vampires.

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honestly, I hav read so many cringe worthy novels, books, fanfictions, etc. What really angers me is that some of the fanfictions that have horrible baby language is more popular than good fanfictions that aren't disgusting or written by a five year old.  :>_>:

 

I read one 'fanfiction' that was basically a script. It's just....ugh...

 

Student 1: Min Young? Oh her? She is one of our targets. She is always the loner in the school. She never makes friends here and she is always like that ever since she was here.

Yong Guk was shocked and then he left. BAP followed too, and they saw her in the garden drawing something while eating the food.

Yong Guk sat next to her and said, “Hey†and BAP as well.

Min Young: Oh hello. Why are you guys here? While she closes her drawing pad

Himchan: what about you?

Min Young: this is my spot

Young Jae: what are you drawing?

Min Young: nothing

Then Jong Up takes it and runs. Then Min Young runs after like a cheetah and took it. BAP was shocked how fast she was and she came back.

Jong Up: is that the school garden you draw?

Min Young: yes. . .

Jong Up: you are a good artist

Zelo: may I see please?

Min Young: sure here

Zelo and Young Jae eyes were wide

Zelo: why don’t you go to art school?

Min Young: can’t because my parents don’t want me to go there.

Yong Guk: why?

Min Young: it is there rule, I did want to be an artist and own my own art gallery. I want to be a photographer as well to put up my photos and drawings.

Dae Hyun: did you ever convince them?

Min Young: couple times, but they reject the idea because you know a lot of people thinks that they don’t make as much money as they expect.

Jong Up: it isn’t about money though

Min Young: I am taking it secretly so I could go to an art college and get financial aid for it

Himchan: aren’t you rich? This is a rich school

Min Young: who said I wasn’t rich? I am rich; I am an heir well my parent is. I am working a part time job to fill in my art supplies, camera, and such. I don’t want my parents to be suspicious with the money withdraw and such. So, I just use it for shopping and such not art or photography related. 

 

 

the sad thing is, they have more subscribers on this story than all my fanfictions combined.

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any fanfiction or original writing starting with "she woke up and sighed. going to her closet she found her skinny jeans, a black low-cut top with frills and matched it with her gucci purse. she also put on a couple of checkered boots and two kinds of bracelets. she lined her eyes with thick eyeliner and set her wavy, chestnut colored hair in a bun."

 

like k i don't need two pages describing the character you've obviously based off yourself

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honestly, I hav read so many cringe worthy novels, books, fanfictions, etc. What really angers me is that some of the fanfictions that have horrible baby language is more popular than good fanfictions that aren't disgusting or written by a five year old.  :>_>:

 

I read one 'fanfiction' that was basically a script. It's just....ugh...

 

Student 1: Min Young? Oh her? She is one of our targets. She is always the loner in the school. She never makes friends here and she is always like that ever since she was here.

Yong Guk was shocked and then he left. BAP followed too, and they saw her in the garden drawing something while eating the food.

Yong Guk sat next to her and said, “Hey†and BAP as well.

Min Young: Oh hello. Why are you guys here? While she closes her drawing pad

Himchan: what about you?

Min Young: this is my spot

Young Jae: what are you drawing?

Min Young: nothing

Then Jong Up takes it and runs. Then Min Young runs after like a cheetah and took it. BAP was shocked how fast she was and she came back.

Jong Up: is that the school garden you draw?

Min Young: yes. . .

Jong Up: you are a good artist

Zelo: may I see please?

Min Young: sure here

Zelo and Young Jae eyes were wide

Zelo: why don’t you go to art school?

Min Young: can’t because my parents don’t want me to go there.

Yong Guk: why?

Min Young: it is there rule, I did want to be an artist and own my own art gallery. I want to be a photographer as well to put up my photos and drawings.

Dae Hyun: did you ever convince them?

Min Young: couple times, but they reject the idea because you know a lot of people thinks that they don’t make as much money as they expect.

Jong Up: it isn’t about money though

Min Young: I am taking it secretly so I could go to an art college and get financial aid for it

Himchan: aren’t you rich? This is a rich school

Min Young: who said I wasn’t rich? I am rich; I am an heir well my parent is. I am working a part time job to fill in my art supplies, camera, and such. I don’t want my parents to be suspicious with the money withdraw and such. So, I just use it for shopping and such not art or photography related. 

 

 

the sad thing is, they have more subscribers on this story than all my fanfictions combined.

 

omg that was physically painful to read.

 

worst book i've ever read was twilight. i couldn't make it past the first chapter.

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