BYSDana 48 Posted December 29, 2014 Share Posted December 29, 2014 Hello ~ I have a BAP fanfic that I've been writing for some time and I hope you guys try and read a chapter or two ^^ Its called "A chance encounter" And I'll post the description for the fic: What if everything in your life is turned upside down, how would you overcome it? This is what happens to Hwa young as her father suddenly dies, Hwa young and her mom try to recollect the broken pieces. That is until they're contacted by an old friend of her father's who tells her to come Seoul, South Korea to take care of her father's company (Soul Star) and accepts the deal. What she doesn't expect was to meet someone that would change her outlook on life; Bang Yongguk. She meets a second family who are B.A.P and finds comfort but yet still, she feels like there's something missing. Past mistakes come to haunt her family and shocking secrets come to light, will she have the strength to go on? Or will she crash and burn? But could music mend the broken ends of her heart and overcome her biggest secrets? Sometimes things are not always as they are, especially the ones that are the closest to her. “Music is not only to enjoy, I think that there is a lot to learn from it too. That’s why we have meaningful lyrics. I want to make them so that they are still valuable even as time passes. - Yongguk *Its suitable for all ages although the story isn't complete I might have mature content but nothing extreme like smut* Suggestions and comments are welcomed ^^ Link to the story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/699852/a-chance-encounter-romance-yongguk-melodrama-himchan-bap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baetich 607 Posted December 29, 2014 Share Posted December 29, 2014 The main element that captures my eyes when looking for a fanfiction to read is, naturally, the title. It is the focal reason why I decided to read a fanfic. Here, in your fanfic, you need to work and look for a title that's not cliche, and your title is cliche. Sorry if I offended you. Basically, avoid everything that is cliche. Avoid cliche words and plots and titles and sentences. Make your work have a unique print on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BYSDana 48 Posted December 30, 2014 Author Share Posted December 30, 2014 The main element that captures my eyes when looking for a fanfiction to read is, naturally, the title. It is the focal reason why I decided to read a fanfic. Here, in your fanfic, you need to work and look for a title that's not cliche, and your title is cliche. Sorry if I offended you. Basically, avoid everything that is cliche. Avoid cliche words and plots and titles and sentences. Make your work have a unique print on it. No offense taken I'm thinking to change it (the title) because the more I work with it the more I want my story to be original and also because I'm always constantly changing tiny things in my chapter or adding parts because I think it would either sound better this way and that, etc. Not sure if you could reccomend a good title to me then since you had suggestions for it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baetich 607 Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 No offense taken I'm thinking to change it (the title) because the more I work with it the more I want my story to be original and also because I'm always constantly changing tiny things in my chapter or adding parts because I think it would either sound better this way and that, etc. Not sure if you could reccomend a good title to me then since you had suggestions for it? You could use this site for help: http://www.writing-world.com/fiction/titles.shtml Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BYSDana 48 Posted December 31, 2014 Author Share Posted December 31, 2014 You could use this site for help: http://www.writing-world.com/fiction/titles.shtml Okay, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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