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Hi guys! I've recently discovered asianfanfics and I'm deciding to create my own stories!

For now I'm going to create fanfics in a simple format, the structure is as stated below:

 

  • Background information
  • story, the main character's communicating to one another or to other side characters (don't know the name of this type of story writing) with some narrations

    e.g
    Ronald: You're fat, Subin :D
    Subin: .....
    (Subin turns away and ignores Ronald.) 
  • Conclusion to the story.

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the formats chosen may vary.

 

~ Completed and posted stories, all created by me, Ronald :D ~

I've decided not to post in the aznfanfics site because I've created my piece for you guys, OneHallyu. I don't care what type of responses I get or what people might think about me after reading my horribly crafted pieces, I will not stop doing what I want to do ^^

 

The Dance project

 

 

part 1 >here<

part 2 >coming soon<

 

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Hi guys! I've recently discovered asianfanfics and I'm deciding to create my own stories!

 

For now I'm going to create fanfics in a simple format, the structure is as stated below:

 

  • Background information
  • story, the main character's communicating to one another or to other side characters (don't know the name of this type of story writing) with some narrations

     

    e.g

    Ronald: You're fat, Subin :D

    Subin: .....

    (Subin turns away and ignores Ronald.) 

  • Conclusion to the story.

Be anticipating my fan fictions!

 

(coming soon!)

 

LOOOLOL  :happy:

 

good luck with your fanfic!!  :ahmagah:

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LOOOLOL  :happy:

 

good luck with your fanfic!!  :ahmagah:

 

lols, thanks ^^

 

I've wanted to post some a long time ago... but I've been reading some random fan fictions and the quality and ideas of their piece are so complex which makes mine look like a child made story LOL

 

but screw it! I'm going through with it :D

 

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I'm going to keep it simple until I get better, then I'll create something more complex and hopefully more people would want to come have a read ^_^

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yup :p

 

damn...you guys found out so quickly lol, I was going to hide this from you guys until I've made heaps of posts xD

Your thread is on the 'Recent Topics' section lol

If I got home later I wouldn't know about it.

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aw. I rarely check that section, I mainly look through the lobby and random threads and go, "yup, I'm done here..." LOL

Btw, are you sure you don't want a little bit of smut? That would be interesting.

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At least leave us guessing, don't fully explain some situations, so we can fill in with our perverted imagination.

ah thanks, I'll keep that in mind LOL

 

keep shooting them suggestions at me, I'll use them for my stories. I am a noob at writing fan fictions afterall...

 

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great use of the grey colouring I wouldn't have realised if I didn't tilt my head to the screen.... LOL

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  • 2 weeks later...

The Dance Project

- part 1 -

 

 

 

Setting: The story is set in Australia 2006, in a suburb called St. Albans.

 

Main Characters: 

·         Ronald (male): a year 8 student who has a small crush on Subin and eventually falls deeply in love with her.

·         Subin (female): a year 8 student.

 

(Monday morning)

   The school bell rings and students enters the class room. The teacher waits patiently for the class to settle down before announcing the dance project. This task requires you to be in groups of twos. After hearing the news Ronald couldn’t wait to pick Subin as his partner, Ronald knew for certain that he would be paired with Subin because they were both outcasts of the class, neither of them had any friends in that class. Once everybody has chosen their partner they began planning their project together for the rest of the lesson. 

 

Ronald: So... Subin, looks like we're forced to be paired up again.

 

Which was a good thing for himself, not so much for her. She smiles and begins staring down at the worksheet that they were handed.

 

Ronald: Hmm... do you have any idea about what's required?

Subin: We have to create our own dance moves for a song of our choice. One of us is required to do the dancing and the other is to sing.

Ronald: Sounds easy (sarcasm), so... which role do you prefer?

Subin: I don't mind, which do you want?

Ronald: Well... I'm horrible at both... we're screwed.

Subin: How about this, I'll do the singing and help you with creating the dance moves?

Ronald: Perfect! That's what I call a plan!

(lunch bell goes off)

Ronald: See you after the break!

Subin: Yup!

 

(Next class)

 

    Ronald enters the room and searches for Subin but she wasn't there yet so he saved a spot next to himself for her. Subin enters the room and when Ronald spots her he frantically waves to grab her attention.

 

Ronald: Hey Subin! Take a seat!

Subin: Hi (in a gentle voice and a killer smile)

 

    During the last few minutes of the lesson

 

Ronald: I've been thinking... do you want to work on the project together during our lunch break?

Subin: I'd love to but I've got some studying to do, how about my place on Thursday night?

Ronald: Sounds good, see you on Thursday!

Subin: See you

 

(Thursday night arrives)

 

    On the way to Subin's house a lot of things were going through Ronald's mind. The few days felt like eternity to him, at last it was Thursday! Ronald made it to Subin's house and began knocking on the front door.

 

Ronald: Hello? anybody home?

 

   He hears footsteps approaching from the inside of the house then the door unlocks. It was Subin and it looks like she just got out of the shower, she greets him then directs him to her room, explains that her parents will not be home as they've gone on holidays and then goes to get dressed in the bathroom.

   Ronald enters into Subin's room and sits on the chair at Subin's desk. He stares at a photo of Subin which seems to be taken recently, he could not take his eyes off it, she looked so cute in it. Moments later Subin enters the room with chains around her neck and a whip in her hands. 

Subin: It's your lucky day today!

 

A voice in the distance seems to be calling out to him...

"Ronald... ? Hello... ? Ronald.... RONALD!" he realises it was the real Subin and snaps out of his daydreaming. 

 

Subin: We'll begin after I find my CD player, I've got some songs that we could use.

Ronald: Ok.

 

   As Subin searches for her player Ronald fixed his gaze onto her, "So.... pretty.... is she an angel?" he thought.

 

(Subin finds her CD player)

 

Subin: C'mon, let's get to work!

Ronald: Right.

 

"To be continued"

 

 

 

 

Hello guys! Thank-you for reading my first reading my first fan fiction that I've posted! it may not be even close to the best fanfic that you've ever read but I've put in a lot of time and effort into this piece so I hope you all enjoyed :D

 

If you have any comments you want to make about my piece of writing, good or bad, feel free to do so ^_^

 

[News]

University classes has began so I will not have as much free time anymore but I will continue to create more fan fictions!

 

[A little information about my piece of writing]

Though the main character's names are taken from myself and my ultimate bias, their personalities are completely made up. I tried to make the male character as different as possible to myself in the story. This story was inspired by Seungri's "Next Day" mv, in which I believe was fan-made? lol. Anyways, Seungri's "Next Day" song was one of my favoruites :D

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This is probably the first fanfic I read and I thought I was reading I"s manga again lol

 

Now that you started, don't forget to keep updating.

 

"it looks like she just got out of the shower" -> She could be using only a towel! More details would be interesting!

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This is probably the first fanfic I read and I thought I was reading I"s manga again lol

 

Now that you started, don't forget to keep updating.

 

"it looks like she just got out of the shower" -> She could be using only a towel! More details would be interesting!

 

She definitely just got out of shower because she is naked.  :stare:

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