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Help with iambic tetrameter poem


hais

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For an English class assignment, my teacher is making us do a modern version of a pastoral poem where we choose a modern day job and write up a poem that alludes to a lover's confession. It has to be in iambic tetrameter and I dont know if my poem is following it? Its been peer edited by another student who is dumb like me about this meter  :derp: 

 

So please.. Anyone who understands iambic tetrameter, can you check for me and help fix some words that does not go well with the flow?  :rlytearpls:  

 

 

cuz nobody knows, its gone

 

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