TheVirginThotty 3,905 Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 So... I did 2 takes and sang it a bit differently...didn't know which 1 was better..literally wrote these short lyrics in like... 2 mins... I SHALL GROW AS A SONG WRITER.... hopefully eh if you want a full version lemme know.. VOCAL CLIPS http://vocaroo.com/i/s1dwFWTixASG http://vocaroo.com/i/s19RMGobl7fc LYRICS A twinkle in your eyes like the star on the tree A bright and shining you's the best present to me You're as pure as the snow falling from the sky~ A silent prayer that you'll return these feelings to me My heart is thumping from your simple touch (ooo) baby~ I look into your eyes I never want this moment to end~ Love could be fleeting but our love will last because I'll Hold you all night~ hold you all night~ I will not let go, the feeling you give's (give is...there goes the english language..I think.) Just like on christmas day~ The feeling you give me Is just like on christmas day~ It's like I have just Just woken up to find a special present under the christmas tree~ Your love's like christmas day~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umma Kyungsoo 196 Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 I think the pitch was a little bit too low for your range, but its pretty good nonetheless P.S: Can you also sing first snow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swagger 10,332 Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 I agree and think maybe it's not in the right key or pitch for your voice. I also know your working with limited equipment. other than that sounded ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVirginThotty 3,905 Posted November 22, 2014 Author Share Posted November 22, 2014 I think the pitch was a little bit too low for your range, but its pretty good nonetheless P.S: Can you also sing first snow? I agree and think maybe it's not in the right key or pitch for your voice. I also know your working with limited equipment. other than that sounded ok Yeah lol ah tried ah tried! And yeah I'll do first snow :D ty for le feed back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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