[COVER] EXO - Christmas Day

[TheVirginThotty]

So... I did 2 takes and sang it a bit differently...didn't know which 1 was better..literally wrote these short lyrics in like... 2 mins...

 

I SHALL GROW AS A SONG WRITER....

 

hopefully

 

eh if you want a full version lemme know..

 

VOCAL CLIPS

 

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1dwFWTixASG

 

http://vocaroo.com/i/s19RMGobl7fc

 

LYRICS

 

A twinkle in your eyes like the star on the tree

A bright and shining you's the best present to me

You're as pure as the snow falling from the sky~

A silent prayer that you'll return these feelings to me

My heart is thumping from your simple touch (ooo) baby~

I look into your eyes I never want this moment to end~

 

Love could be fleeting but our love will last because I'll 

 

Hold you all night~ hold you all night~

I will not let go, the feeling you give's (give is...there goes the english language..I think.)

Just like on christmas day~

The feeling you give me

Is just like on christmas day~

It's like I have just

Just woken up to find a special present

under the christmas tree~

 

Your love's like christmas day~

[Umma Kyungsoo]

I think the pitch was a little bit too low for your range, but its pretty good nonetheless

P.S: Can you also sing first snow? 

[swagger]

I agree and think maybe it's not in the right key or pitch for your voice.  I also know your working with limited equipment.  other than that sounded ok

[TheVirginThotty]

I think the pitch was a little bit too low for your range, but its pretty good nonetheless

P.S: Can you also sing first snow? 

 

 

I agree and think maybe it's not in the right key or pitch for your voice.  I also know your working with limited equipment.  other than that sounded ok

 

Yeah lol ah tried ah tried! And yeah I'll do first snow :D ty for le feed back