OMG YOU CANNOT WRITE friggin TRUE STORIES and call them 'fan fiction'!!!!!
lolol just kiddin, (but i really think you might have hit upon exactly what actually happened, lol)
this is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its really really really really really good, and i wanna go shoot myself right now for thinking i can ever write...
dialogue driven pieces are so difficult, but even in that you captured both their personalities soooo well, i'm just..
in awe
what the hell do you mean you're not good at writing orz you've given me an utter total and complete complex!!